great fic

poignant, dark, and chilling.

"Tomorrow the word ends.She'll enjoy the silence."

that has to be one of the most dark things i've ever read.

love it!

Interesting, but it doesn't seem to fit the tone of Wonderfalls (or Buffy, really) that well. Still, interesting.

very poetic, with a touch of silent finality. a complete story in its own way.

I like the concept of a Wonderfalls/BtVS crossover and I think this worked out well. There is a similarity in the universes since a writer(s) moved with the show and a good crossover should always exploit similarities.

I also liked the conceit of the countdown. It worked really well for a drabble.

If this is a prolouge, its OK, but I don't get the point. Hopefully, there are more chapters to come, bacause nothing is obvious.

Try to make things a bit more obvious.

A bit (horribly) grim but very evocative.