Omg, this story makes me cry!!
Very, very well writen!

This was so sad. The poem at the end...I nearly cried.
You really have a knack for writing, but this fic was so sad...but probably more realistic than what happened in the movie.
This story is so awesome, it should have a million good review!

this is an incredible story of what if? i very much enjoyed it although i was saddened by jack dying, it makes sense that he'd want Will to live one day in his shoes ^-^

It's a fact. I don't cry.

But you made my eyes sting...

Jeez...get some prozac...that was deprssing...but good...*sniff*

that was so sad!
poor Jack.
live for me... God my eyes filled up!

wow. That'a a great story. I'll review 8,0,0 times if more people don't start reviewing. Maybe they just don't like sad fics. Keep up the great work!

This is so sad! I'll keep reading.

Wow, this was really powerful work. I love your use of language - you really have a way with words and descriptions. There are really no words to express how amazingly beautiful I found this story - I am almost in tears. I just really loved this fic - keep up the good work!!

-Meggie

Whoa...that was sad! That was really sad! I liked this, but it was just too sad. Well anyway, good job on writing. You have a way with words. Keep up the good work.