Nah, this one made me sad. But I loved it notheless.

Very sad, but very well done. You've captured her emotions brilliantly.

wow...that is so sad. Very good writing.

Damn.

Oh yay! this is the chock-fulla-angst I've come to know andd love. Even though, I wait daily for Last Chance (gee, that sounds sad) to be updated, is there a chance that this one will be continued later?

I like this take on where Sara's drinking came from, and that it was Grissom-inspired. Even though I'm a supreme sucker for the happy ending, this idea is really a good one.

Jess

So sad.

I'm very impressed by this story, especially given what you've previously published. You've shown real versatility. I thought the alternating tenses were intriguing and effective, not confusing at all.

It also shows courage to go up against the monolith of G/S fanfic convention. You'll probably get nasty reviews on the theme of, "Sara would never, ever have an abortion!" Well they can go soak their collective heads because you handled a touchy subject with grace. Good on ya.

Wow. That was really a tragic story, but yet it follows so closely to the characters and to what really might have happened...wow. Great piece of writing, it really is amazing. Great Job.

I never ever review - but this was so poignant that I had to say how much I loved it and to ask you to please never stop writing these stories!

wow, this is so powerful I can scarcely put it into words. I hope you plan to continue, but this does make a nice little vignette too. Great job.

Wiccamage

The third/first person was deliberate. First person for the present timeline, third person for the memory recall. Sorry if that was confusing. It was written in a couple of hours at three in the morning and it seemed to make sense at the time.

I like this. Except you may want to decide if it's first person or third person.