Kara does inspire intense fanfic, doesn't she? Wow. That was really nice. Very believable. Great job.

Lovely story. Thanks.

That was awesome. Extremely well-written and the characterisations seemed spot on. I especially love how it all flows together.

Oh, that was beautiful! You delved into the painful moment, built it a deep foundation and made the ending all that much more poignant. Thank you for posting this story!

This was an extremely good story. I like it a lot.

Argh you clever little devil :) This is brilliant! I've been trawling through our other sites looking for it - hoping against hope that you'd published it...I was like some crazed half beast - all frantic and frustrated - and then I searched for your penname and FOUND it :) Ah...it's fantastic! I know I tell you this all the time - but your choice of words / descriptions / pace / dialogue argh every frakin' thing you do is amazing. Loved everything in this - especially loved the bits of humour

The thing I love the most elle is that you give the characters substance - they're not just a bunch of words on a html formed page - they read 'real'. That sense of numbness in the extremeties - the cold permafrost in your guts - the exhalation that you don't expect...real loss and pain and shock is like that.
Anyway - this review just doesn't even do it justic. So all I can say is, and I quote Oliver - "Please Sir - may I have some more?"
PS I know I rave on and on about this show - but it is just the most amazing AMAZING piece of writing on the old idiot box ever!

Lovely written - beautiful and almost flawless.
Good job!

aw! see what you did? now i'm crying. beautiful piece.

I love it! It sounds just like Kara! More please! ;)