this is strong. you should write more like this

The short sentences make this is very powerful story, well done

You show very well the reason why Del doesn’t like robots in the beginning. Very well written. I’m so glad to see an “I, Robot” fanfic. I like ‘I,Rotot”. Sonny reminds me so mush to Zeta. I hope you’ll write another “I,Robot’ story.

good fic! the pov of characters are great, you have way for writing

Great concept! There are a couple of gramatical errors, but that aside, well done!

Well done, an excellent look into what happened to Del!

And it's great to see more I, Robot stories here, keep up the good work!

And read a few of ours, if you wish! lol