Fantastic xD

Lolol that was funny xD

this is so funny it seems like it most positivly could happen

Haha I love it! Awesome job! Very unqiue idea. :D I've always loved this book series and I just went to see the movie yesterday. Kudos to you!

I liked these parts:

The murky sky loomed over Vampire Mountain that morning, the deep plums and gold’s of bruised human skin.

The tiny underwear was black, speckled with blood red polka dots

Cirque Du Non Pants...I'd have to remember that one.

XD

*Laughs histerically* Omg that would have been so akward!

wahahhahahahahhaha! GOOD ONE! MAKES ME LAUGH! @w@

lol

hehe... I can imagine Larten 'flouncing'... lol.

this rocks!

that was so funny! omg

I couldnt stop laughing when i reached the end of the story! Actually, i'm still laughing. Great story 3 Cirque du non pants...i'll have to remember that too!

THAT IS AWESOME! You are officially my god!

Man that was so funny! I was laughing the whole time! Okay not really, but to the point where it got interesting. 'The Naughty Vamp'...nice one! I love that so much! Great job!

omg this was so funny! how did you manage to come up with it?

i love it! Great story, well done!