Incredibly awesome. I loved the paragraph about Lindsey, as well as the section on The Big Picture.

I know this is like ten years late, but I was just linked to this story today. I loved it. You managed to capture Lewis's sarcasm almost perfectly!

This is glorious. I highly approve. Screwtape’s tone just oozes through here. Well done indeed.

That was simply amazing. Having read, or more accurately, listened to The Screwtape Letters 16 times or so, I can state with confidence that you captured the Screwtape's character and writing style of question and answer internal debate perfectly. You also tied it in with Angel quite well, although I am not as familiar with the series as I am with Screwtape. An amateur writer, such as myself, is hard pressed to find anything to criticize.

Found this recommended at TV Tropes. It wins, majorly.

Oh, I do enjoy Screwtape's letters. I find his letter to Holland just as enlightening as I found the letters published by Mr. Lewis. You seem to have captured his voice well. :)

Oh, this is just great stuff sir. Methinks I need to dig up my copy of the Screwtape Letters next...

A great story. Very funny.

OMG! This is the most clever fiction that I've ever read in my life! The Screwtape Letters are one of my favorite writings from C.S. Lewis and this fic hits the spot completely. Marvelous! _

Very neat indeed! You definitely capture the feel of both series.

Deliciously evil!

Mostly I'm just over the moon that there's Screwtape Letters FF. The fact that you've done it well is just gravy.

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That was amazing. It really did feel as though it was written by Lewis, but it applied perfectly to Angel. That was a very convinving piece of work!

Beautiful. And so very fitting. ]

Wow, this was really good. Screwtape Letters is one of my favorite Lewis books, and I think you captured the tone of it well. It's a very cool sort of seeing things from a different perspective. I like it a lot. I'm putting it on my favorite stories list. :-)