"He could swallow you whole" indeed. That was amusing.

I disagree with you about your "sucking at writing Sanzo." I think you write quite well and I loved your portrayal of Sanzo. Now, after reading this, I'm going to go read your other works.

I do believe you're brilliant, m'dear. Another lovely one. Drunk Sanzo is entertaining.

hm, very, very good, I must admit. A wonderful way of writing, this is. ^.^ You are a wonderful writer, and I can't wait to read more from you.

For the record, I love this line:

"The only reason you haven’t shot him yet out of annoyance is because he ** off the monks and if there’s anything that you can do to make living in a monastery, with all it’s **-kissing and idiotic self-righteousness, any more bearable, it is to ** off a bunch of up-tight ** who wear sheets as clothing."

Aah, you say that you don't write Sanzo very well but that's something I'll have to disagree with you on! I actually think your Sanzo was pretty well spot-on. And Goku of course!

I really liked the way this was written, it seems very much like Sanzo to be so bothered by it that he keeps thinking about it, and analyzing, and denying, and so on so forth.

*fangirlish flailing* I love this story.