Haha this is amazing. I practically fell out of my chair laughing. Another great fic!!

Bwahahaha!! X3

Hahahahaha I love it!! So funny, great work! I added it to my favs! ^.^

MAKE MORE FOR THE LOVE OF EVIL MAKE ANOTHER ONE!
IT WAS SO FUNNY

Aw God I'm still laughing at this, so funny! The whole song intro ending with SEPHIROTH! hahahahah!

Ahh. Brotherly love X3

“…What if I don’t want to, shorty?”

“…JUST GO GET THE DAMN STICK MUSCLE-HEAD!”

“BITE ME!”

XD
Poor Sephiroth... now he'll have to get more ketchup after his visit to the dry cleaners or the leather outfit store ;)

Stares at screen before busting our laughing, oh man that is too rich! I loved it!

Mwahaha! I laugh at your antics!^^

@Neo-Nebula: No, that doujinshi was not by Kadaj. Kadaj wrote the fiction first and I made the doujinshi after I asked for Kadajs permission. Only the smoke-break page is not written by Kadaj but by me.
Hope this is OKi with you Kadaj^^
I come visiting your page from time to time^^

Yay! You know, I read you comic of this and printed it a long time ago! I still have it in my room! I love it! I thought the title sounded familiar, so I read it. As I began to, I thought "Where have I seen this before?", then quickly realized it was the comic! I love it! Go Yazoo! Except, you left the smoke break out of this fanfic.

GYAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! *wipes a tear*

HILARIOUS! I loved it... Ketchup packets... who wouldve thought Sephiroth liked KETCHUP!! lol, I loved it, it was pretty funny the fact that you put Wazoo first intead of Yazoo... That story just made my day!! Im definetely putting this one in my favorites...
~dmg18~

OMG! So hillarious! XD But it's true, leather really is hard to wash... I don't think there's anything that can be improved. It's a great little fanfic, and I'd love to see more! ^_^ Also, i loved the comic you made out of it too. Great job and keep writing! =D

Oh god! I was laughing by the end of that! Wonderful job and very amusing! I especially like the last line.

@?Whyinthehell?: Yup, it's mine. Someone had emailed me personally, asking if she could turn it into a doujin, and I agreed. :D

http://w.animemanga.de/doujinshi/anzeige.php?doc_modus=ausgabe&id=401

I suppose you're referring to this, eh?