uh i'd just like to say i dislike lil' Freddy in this fic.


AND i think that he don't diserve another chance!

Great chapter. I'm lovin all the drama. Why is Alicia want so badly for Angelina and Fred not to work and Angelina and George to work. *whines* I want to no what happens next! You haven't updated in over a year. Hurry up and update. Great writing.

First off, YAY for writing a Fred/Angelina that isn't like EVERY OTHER FIC! I really like the Katie- Alicia dynamic. Alicia as a very determined meddler is fantastic and funny in parts. I like how you had it all blow up in her face too. And Katie is a saint- esp. when she's like, no, right now we have to be there for Angelina. Are you going to do anything with the Wood/Katie thing? Seemed like that was a big little subplot that hasn't really been addressed yet. Has George told Fred yet? I'm glad Angelina told Fred there was someone else. Even if Fred is being a MAJOR git, he still needs to be told what's going on- if not for his sake, then for Angelina and George's, because they need to be good people and fess up. And I just love, love, love how you ended Chapter 10- in fact, all of Ch. 10- because it can't be simple. I hope you keep going with this and that pesky writer's block doesn't give you too much trouble. And one more thing- I don't find your chapters too short- they always seem to draw to a natural conclusion, so don't force it if it won't come- just post what ya got! (Please, please update!)

wow... Pretty good story love it!

You always have us at the edge of our seats. I was very tempted to yell at my computer and tell George not to break it off. ^_^
Well, good job & update soon.

I'm starting to wonder if Fred will ever know about George and Angelina.

Great chapter and it took you less than a month to update. Yay!

oh, the chapter that i've so long been waiting for.
don't worry, you far surpassed my expectations.
okay, for once i didn't want to murder alicia the entire time i was reading this chapter. for the first time i actually swaw her as i BELIEVE you were trying to portray her...a...*cough* helping friend whose plans went terribly arwy.

poor, poor angie.

i loved, i mean, ADORED that scene when george and angelina were talking in the dragon's back. with their thoughts and then their words - i loved it. i think i read it, like, 3 times. it was so heartwrenching. why are you so CRUEL!? it was all going so well!!

i'm angry with fred - i hated how he was acting when she stumbled in crying. he seemed smug, like, "in your face" type deal. grr. but i still feel sorry for him...kind of...

i guess the next chapter will show more insight to what fred's been feeling/up to.

update soon bebita,

~angelface04~

that's so good!! update soon!!

update quick! i luv this story!!

I like this chap. I hope u update again. (just make sure u do it a little quicker! LOL j/k)

i'm confused (as i tend to be with you ^.^)
anyway, you made me hate alicia even more than i used to (and by looking at my last review, you know that i really, REALLY don't like her). she's roped poor little innoccent katie into the whole mess. letters? what's going on?!?!?!? ALCIA, WHAT IS GOING ON INSIDE YOUR EVIL, SICK, TWISTED MIND!?!??!? I WANT TO KILL YOU!

*takes a deep breath*

i looked a fred with sympathetic eyes as well when angelina told him that there was someone else. and that part where george promised fred that he would tell him if he knew who angelina was in love with...that part broke my fragile little heart (no more tape will fit on it, thanks to you.)

that karmas a butt, huh? it always shows up when you don't want it around...(but i guess who ever WANTS karma around...unless it's good i suppose). anyway, despite fred's despising cheating-ness, i still feel sorry for him. he was just scared...

oh, and i have been raving about this hogsmeade thing for a while, eh?? it's in the next chapter?? YES! *dances*

don't make me wait too long to read about it. :D

lub you, and your story...

~angelface04~

Oh, Karma, how good you've been to me. =)

When Angelina told Fred that there was someone else, I thought he was going to lose it right there and then.

And I feel so bad for George, lying to his brother the way that he is. I wonder how karma will repay him.

And I'm a little scared about Katie and Alicia, maybe I missed something, but I have no idea what they are up too. I hope more is revealed in the next chapter.

*Sighs* Guess I'll be waiting awhile for that one, huh?

Have a good Holiday break!

I really like your story. I feel like I was Angelina and could feel everything that she could feel. You have a good writing style. I hope you update soon.

Hoyl drama. This story reminds me of high school. Yeap...you got it down perfectly. You go.

This is hella good. Keep going.