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| Nachoman1 2006-12-15 ch 13,  | abuseDarn enjoyable. I personally believe you are either giving undue priority to deforming Akane's already two-dimensional personality, or not giving enough air-time to her as a comic relief. I'll keep reading. |
| Blackdex 2006-05-19 ch 13, | abuseWill do full review after part three, Ciao |
| Tigger-69 2005-04-29 ch 13, | abuseSecond series as good if not better than the first. Nabikis involvement grows Ranma shows use more of the hero we know he is and the romance builds. The computer game was never this thrilling. Fantastic. |
| Queenmunchkin 2005-02-11 ch 12, | abuseMarvelous, wonderful, very exciting and really, really, really, really, excellent. I love your story and you. I think your characters are great,especially alpha commandoes and jack and nabiki. Keep writing more stories. Love your crazy stalker X |
| SHAWN PROVONCHA 2005-02-09 ch 11, anon. | abuseGREAT CHAPTER. |
| Lov3the3vil 2005-02-09 ch 12, | abuseAUGH! Awesomeness! I love this story. I just have to tell I absolutely love this story. It's awesome. It has action, violence, humor, and just the right amount of fluff. *sigh* can't wait till the next chapter. Update soon! Bye! |
| Jerry Unipeg 2005-02-09 ch 12, | abuseI LOVE THIS CHAPTER! Great way to end this chapter! |
| Jerry Unipeg 2005-02-09 ch 11, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! |
| Mz-Kitty-Kat 2005-02-09 ch 12, | abuseWhoa! that's one of the longest and probably the fastest written fics I have read! I dont know anything about X-com but I loved how you created this story. So much action and I loved the part where Akane had her just deserts! Lol. Is it finished already? Please continue writing... and thank you for reviewing my story too! Ja Ne, (",) |
| Wonderbee31 2005-02-09 ch 12, | abuseWow, this was a rocking good story! You wrapped up things very neatly, and Ranma nad Nabiki have come to fully appreciate the other. I don't know what else to say, so, I'll simply say, bravo, for some great storytelling, and hope to see more soon. |
| Wonderbee31 2005-02-09 ch 11, | abuseAll right! Ranma rescued Nabiki, and by gosh, I hope they decide to tie the knot now, before something else happens, or unless Ranma thiinks that he should leave her so he won;t have to face the pain of losing her, and maybe get her transferred to someplace that he thinks is safer. Ah, who am I kidding,if Ranam tried that, Nabiki'd whip the holy heck outta him. |
| phoenix.ru 2005-02-09 ch 12, | abuseA really nice story.The first Ranma / X-com crossover I've read... and I'm GREATLY pleased with it. Are you planning any continuation? Maybe with SG?? |
| Silverscale 2005-02-08 ch 12, | abuseThis was a wonderful chapter, and if this is the end of this story then I thank you from writting it. |
| Silverscale 2005-02-08 ch 11, | abuseVery good chapter, keep updating. |
| imortis 2005-02-08 ch 12, | abuseAre you going to extend this for an X-Com: Apocalypse fic? Other then that I am more then happy with this story, the only problem I have with it, is the fact that its ending ^_^; imortis |