   Yami-chan and Unrealistic 6/29/06 . chapter 1interesting concept presented in a very well-written way. i really enjoyed the POV for this. it's different for albel (despite how we already know how arrogant he is)and creates his animosity toward fayt.
great job! |
| IcyGleam 4/12/06 . chapter 1 Albel! You are PERFECT! |
| Moshi Moshi Mai 2/14/06 . chapter 1 Wow! Impressive! D
Moshi Moshi Mai |
| Little Mirage Koas 10/13/05 . chapter 1 Wow...This Is Good.
(It would make more sence if you read it like Welch from Star ocean 3) |
| SilverrWinter 4/15/05 . chapter 1 D! I love it! n.n it was so nice! |
| Kiritalia 2/16/05 . chapter 1 whee this is really really cool! i love the way its going so far! please continue this asap! |
| PuppetLord 2/10/05 . chapter 1 This is really good! I can never understand why all the good fics don't have that many reviews... |
| Sharon 2/1/05 . chapter 1 Well this is turning out pritty good. even if it off Snow white. well almost there you going to make it almost like Snow white? or something new? and it almost like you made Albel the uke. and maybe Fayt more Dominating? something new always to see. lol. |
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