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Keira U.
2008-06-15 . chapter 9
I thought that leaving it at this length is good enough. You didn;t have to answer those other questions for the fic to make perfect sense.
Kitsune Diachi
2007-07-29 . chapter 5
-shakes head- no...i think you did rather well portraying DID take it from someone who has it...only thing is...you really can't remember anything when a different personality/person whatever you wunna call it, takes over...anywhoo good job! i loved it!
blisblop
2006-09-06 . chapter 7
God #7 is so sad.Sobs.You know even adults when they go on a booty call tell someone and make arrangments for a phone call at a certain time and get a licence # ect.You can't be too safe.
blisblop
2006-09-06 . chapter 6
You are sure right about Gravvy..I got it not knowing it was yaoi (but bonus),I collected up to 7 but it was getting screwier than ever so I read the last three pages of the final Volume.Lame is all I can say.Has anyone read the "pornier" version?Is it different?It was the changes in the art that finally got to me,I mean,I like these things because of the artists...Like yami no matsui(Decendents of Darkness) is a more than amazing manga but the girl is using so much computer rendering that...but i can bear the cartoonyness as long as she keeps up the under their noses yaoi and the amazing realism she is capable of,it is truly beautiful and the story keeps getting better!!.(imagine a graphic underage yaoi rape but their is so much detail no one notices.)Too funny.Do not tell either!Naruto is all done by computer now,I haven't made up my mind about that.I loved his line work because it was uneven...we shall see.I really like your fics.The SF one esp.!Keep it up.And Thank You.Bows.
Sasuke Lordess9191
2006-01-14 . chapter 5
hey i liked ur fic so far. i want 2 kno did u get the other personalities from fruits basket?? it really sounds like it. o pleaz reply!
jeanet
2005-08-24 . chapter 8
^_^ that was so awsome.. sasuke adicted to blood.. m that sounds interesting.. stupid Naruto killing Itachi.. ow well can't have it all XD
Shinigami Miya Mizu
2005-08-23 . chapter 8
*Screams* You killed Itachi! *Cries* Not my beautiful killer of a would-be boyfriend. *Cries harder* And by Naruto? Why? Naruto's an idiot! *Goes to corner to sulk and make a shrine to Itachi*
Miya
PS... Other than that... it was awesome!
Shinigami Miya Mizu
2005-06-30 . chapter 7
Wow... that was very... VERY deep. I like this chapter. It was awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Miya
YoungSasuke
2005-06-03 . chapter 7
wow... wow.
I mean...
wow...
This chapter was amazing. How you expressed how shallow Sasuke's parents were, and how he felt after every time he was whored off. I loved it. I really hope that you update soon. Ja ne!
Rebel-blah-blah-blah
2005-06-02 . chapter 7
T.T Sad. So very sad T.T
Nara Mina
2005-06-02 . chapter 7
i liked it^^... poor sasuke though! well good story!
bored-with-my-life
2005-06-02 . chapter 4
cool-e-oes! i loved it! this was great! i liked the other chaps too. keep going! :)
Genial Hinata
2005-06-02 . chapter 7
I really liked # 7 it was interesting. I think your stories have potential, but a lot of the time your details are blurry, or I just dont get the idea where the heck this stuff is taking place. Loved # 7 tho, the rest could use some work. Like # 3 and # 5 confused the bajeebers outa me.
i like vampies
2005-04-16 . chapter 3
at the beginning of the chapter you said that there were no cliffhangers in this thing because they are all separate stories...but in this one what happens to Sasuke? Does he continue to go with Sesshi or does he eventually go back with his family...anwser me or DIE!
i like vampies
2005-04-16 . chapter 2
OMG! You suck! How could anyone write something so horribly stupid and remain alive even after realizing that they were the very one who brought this vile thing to life...i mean that was sad\cool\awsome\awsome...wait i already said awsome...anyway it was awsome...wait i already said that it was awsome...awsomeness...awsomer...awsomest...awsome count is nine...oh yeah
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