You have your Japanese wrong for point (3)

うるさい！ (u-ru-sa-i) is "Shut Up"

Really love your story though! <3

"...like a deranged vampire intent on hugging him to death during the blood sucking." You wrote this before the Acid Tokyo arc, didn't you? I am not going to comment on how ironic that statement is.

I. will. not.

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Oh Mokona, that last line was such a good one. xD Love this story so far, definitely going to read more. :)

This was absolutely intense and amazing and epic and other descriptions of that sort. You HAVE to do a sequel if you haven't already, and I loved every second of it :) Great fic!

Hmm.. the ending was kind of sad. They didn't even get to say their 'last words' to each other. But I thought it was adorable. I think this ending is pretty much open for a sequel, is it not? Great job!

"Is there something I can do for you two?"

LMAO! I just imagined Syaoran saying that in such a rude and annoyed tone and it made me burst out laughing because I could totally believe that one day, dearest calm, level-headed Syaoran would completely freak out at the two for their constant bickering. And it was just so perfect. Although, I'm pretty sure you meant it in a polite way >.

Wonderful fic! I can't wait to read the sequel. ^_^

i enjoyed reading it. please keep up the good work

AH SO FREEKIN CUTE! WAHAHAHAHAHHA!

nice one

nice one

Well, as I expected, that was fantastic. I must admit, considering I'm reading this over a year after it was started, and considering that I have read up to volume 22 in the scanalations of the manga online (in which Fai's past is revealed, and numerous other occurences ... occurr) that I had to pretend I hadn't read all of those subplots.

Some of the information you included was so close to dead on I questioned just how far you'd read ... and some of it is totally off. No offense, of course. As an entity in and of itself this was a great story, and I love how you portrayed the relationship. I am beyond satisfied!

I just wish I could hear your reaction when you read some of the future volumes ^_^, especially one scene in particular... speaking of which, just how far have you gotten by now? Have you read the arc that takes place in the world with acid rain? If so, you probably know which scene I'm talking about. If not, you have much to look forward to. Ack! I have to get to class now... So yeah, great job! Love it! Can't wait for a sequel!

~SCe

Well, this review involves a bit of narration on my part... Having finally gotten around to reading past volume 4 of Tsubasa, and having discovered a few rather delicious scenes... what can I say, the fan-gril in me just had to search for a FaixKurogane fic. But, upon finding one such fic, what else should I find in the author's notes but a reference to another story written by the one-and-only Pikachumaniac! Such was my elation, and such was my joy, that I instantly set out to discover and devour the completed (thankfully, for I am not a patient person) fic.

I fell in love with "Fairy Dust" five years ago, and I was sad to see that you hadn't written much YGO fanfiction since "Painted Sky" (another fav of mine). But now things have changed and my horizons have expanded.

I've only read chapter one, but you have never failed to delight me with your work. I am truly very excited! Having said this... ONWARD into the fluffyness that awaits!

~SCe

just wanted to say i really liked this story and dam rthis was a long time ago! ince job hehe ^^

Oh, I am *so* glad that you stopped using those dang footnote things. I think it was chapter 3 where I was getting so annoyed by those things that I was just about to hit the back button. But thank heavens I didn't, because you wrote Kuro and Fai so perfectly. And OMG, you had Kakyou. I kind of liked him, because he seemed strangely pragmatic to me. And you even had Hokuto in there! I'm still hoping that Clamp puts her into Tsubasa somewhere. But anyway, lovely job.