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| abraxis 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseYou know, the awful thing is, I kind of agree with Severus. My gut feeling, after the last book, is that McGonagall said it right in book one - "Pure dumb luck". The only thing that Harry had going for him other than the Fates working over time to put him in the right place at the right time was that inborn quality of leadership that makes other people want to follow. As for Severus celebrating Sirius' demise, I can't fault him for it one little bit. He wasn't holding a childhood grudge one inch further than Sirius was and Sirius would have reacted exactly the same way if it had been Severus who was dead and he was the one sitting in that kitchen. They both have maturity problems when it comes to that. Besides, Harry was the one who asked. If he didn't want to hear the answer he shouldn't have. I always did think that Harry was a real prat putting his own guilt for Sirius' death off by blaming Severus even when Dumbledore assured him that Severus had done everything he could to warn the Order about the situation. Sorry for the rant on this, just a bit of a sore spot for me. Good story and I loved the way you wrote Severus. |
| midnight tiger 2005-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseo chilling. i like that! thanks for posting. |
| corky42 2005-02-06 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I really like your writing. I read your other stories & they all show the same high quality of style - I especially like the fact that someone has an excellent grasp of grammar & spelling. You are not a sloppy writer & it shows; you care about what you write & that makes it much more enjoyable for the reader. Thanks for sharing. Karen |
| droxy 2005-02-01 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nice one shot |
| Lisa aka lord snapes lady 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseHey! I liked it but there were a couple of things I noticed, its Azkaban not Azcaban, it should be philosophers stone not sorcerors stone(thats the title of the british version of the book, i have no idea why the changed it for other versions!) snd i really don't think that Snape would tell Hermione exactly what was in the prophecy. But you are the author and you do have poetic license! Sorry I didn't email you back but my hotmail has being acting up(old and slow pc more likely) but i did read the email on my phone! i have all the beta's I need hon! thanks anyway! can't wait for some more stories! Lis x |
| vanityfair 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseVery well written, though I'm not sure I understand the ending completely. The first part where he contemplates his feelings towards Black are simply superb. |