Wow, what a lady. You brought forth a side of Elenor that was often lost beneath a hard exterior, sallow skin, and endless pints of booze.

Good job; I enjoyed this story.

This is truly an excellent piece of fiction.

I really can't put the sheer awesomeness and realism into words.

I can't wait to see more SIV work from you.

Excellent. As usual, your characterization is... well, awesome. Elenor isn't just a game character in your story; she's now a real, living, tangible human. Great job once again.

Really love the insight into Elenor's character. Definitely what I perceived her personality as, though the game didn't go into it nearly enough.

*laughs* I sure wish you'd write Elenor for my own story about Cray...

Seriously, well done.

Ah! Finally someone wrote about elenor. She was the highlight of Suikoden IV with such a unqiue personality (and by far the greatest intelligence)

This really gets into the conflict (under her drinking mind with that bottle she always has at her disposal) with -well to be honest i dont know what. I cant explain very well. All i know that this was a very nice fic with good grammar and...

Argh school killed my brain XD i gotta replay suikoden IV...

Well-fricken-done. Elenor was a pretty cool character in the game and you captured what was imagined to be her final moments very nicely; she's definitely not the kind of person to care what others think. Good to see some IV fics coming up, finally.