I'm so glad I finally got a chance to read these last three chapters. Loved them~!
Hope to read more soon! :D

I bet Auron was jealous of Marcus T.T
I loved the flashbacks we got to know a bit more about Marcus and Charlie's relantionship..

thanks for updating btw ^^

I remember when I figured out Auron was dead too. I was like 'Oh snap, it's The Sixth Sense all over again!'

Nice touch with flashbacks before showing Auron's motive for watching Tidus.

Great Chapter!

Words cannot describe accurately how I felt when I noticed the story alert in my inbox. Elation comes closest. There were two story alerts actually, two chapters in about three to four days (can't exactly remember). Inspiration must have hit hard huh?

The storys almost at the end and I can't help but wonder how you'll finish it. Will Charlie go home, or will she stay? And if she stays will she mirror Tidus' fate and end up in the Farplane? Or will she stay in Spira and there end up being some sort of sequel involving Final Fantasy X-2 (How would that work anyways? My mind keeps saying "Charlie's Angels" which doesn't fit although it is good for a giggle). I can't wait to find out! I hope the end doesn't come too soon though. Still lots of time for more drama ^^

Your story is totally AWESOME! I love it! That would be so cool if it happened in real life, going inside a video game. You have genius ideas! I applaud you!

I haven't checked my email in a while so when I saw the emails about this story I was elated. The bit with guardians I especially like. It was different and seeing as this story is definitely different it works out very well.

I would have picked a harder riddle though. It didn't take too long.

Rhetorical question: So now that Yunalesca is dead is the group going to go right for the big bad Sin? Or will it be time for fillers (AKA side missions)?

Can't wait till the next story!

-Psybee

Man, when that part about people atoning for crimes came up, I always said "Like EVERYBODY is down with that!" so I be beating up Yunalesca like crazy! Of course I'd end up like Auron if I did that, so bring some soldiers ya know? Anyway, nice take on it and great chapter!

wow you updated really fast, i'm feeling spoiled =3

Yunalesca is a bitch and a pain to beat if i remember correctly she has like three forms right?
I vote for next chapter to come as fast as this one XD

yay! another update lol

omg you updated, you made my day *-*
I really wanna know what is that demon on Charlie's head, I think the end is near right? they're already in Zanarkand XD
anyway thanks for the chapter ^^

Ah, yes. The Zanarkand Cloister of Trials, the only one you have to come back for the destruction sphere. I like the ball throwing game in the gagazet trials, too bad it doesn't work in real life.

OMG yay! u updated lol

Firs, your trials of Mt Gagazet were better than the games, challenging, too! Love that battle with the last trial, that was supposed to be that giant fiend dragon and you made it better, and if you read my stories, I love the battles! Can't wait to see how Zanarkand plays out, great chapter!

I remember reading this fic some time ago then I lost interest of this fandom for other fandoms. xD

However, I still think that this wonderful so far. x3

Hope you update soon!

-ichi

This is the first, Final Fantasy 10 fanfiction, I have ever read, but it really is cool, especially the demon living inside Charlie, I just like the Seymour for no reason. Anyway well done, and I wish you good luck.