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| IcyTanya 2008-04-21 ch 16,  | abuseWow, this really is something, isn't it? It's nice- I'm already looking forward to finding out what 'the plan' is. You rock! |
| Astrianna 2007-12-03 ch 16, | abuseYAY! Update! It's so nice to see another chapter, I thought you had decided to stop. Good chapter, I really liked the part with Jack and the girls. So funny! I can understand how some things may be hard to write because when I think of a story I see it the same way, like a TV. Anyway, hope an update isn't too slow in coming. |
| lucidscreamer 2007-12-03 ch 16, | abuseNice to see an update, and a very interesting chapter. Teeny quibble: Kemet is spelled with only one 'm' (kmt). |
| IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2007-08-25 ch 15, | abusewell you know its so wrong that they are separating all the soulmates. |
| Tazzy 2007-08-21 ch 15, anon. | abuse*squeals and pounces* You updated! Can't wait for more and it'll be interesting to see the battle with the Yamis and this enemy... *snickers* Poor Jack, slipped a mickey and forgotten about again. |
| salan Trong is too lazy to ... 2007-08-20 ch 15, anon. | abusethank you for updating. a rather interesting twist this is, to be sure. |
| Hocapontas 2007-08-18 ch 15, | abuseWhat are these 'wraiths' that are mentioned in this chapter? And why couldn't the hikari's keep the shadow magic? The Yami's could teach them to use it. |
| Shamise 2007-08-15 ch 15, | abuseThanx for the update! |
| Isis the Sphinx 2006-12-17 ch 14, | abuseVery, very nice. I'm glad you keep the Slash down to a minimum. I've never been a fan of graphics... Like how you did it. Please, Keep writing! |
| Lady Mazikeen 2006-08-04 ch 14, | abuseAh! This is really, really good! I have a rather unhealthy love for crossovers, so I've read quite a few and this is one of the better ones! ^.^ I can't wait until you update again. Ja matta! -Lena |
| IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2006-07-21 ch 14, | abuseoh geez shit just seem to be going down hill. :( |
| SilverWing147 2006-04-14 ch 13, | abuseWow. I just had to catch up on reading this, but this is really good. I'm not an avid fan of SG but I used to watch it a while a go, this is just so cool ^_^ I like you're writing style and I cannot wait to see your next update! You've completely got me hooked ^^; ^_^CHEERIO^_^ |
| mumei 2006-04-05 ch 13, anon. | abuse怪しげな日本語は玉に疵です。 |
| IchikoKitsuneKoumori 2006-03-11 ch 13, | abuseah shit they're gone! Jack's Captured! not good at all |
| Pharaohyamifan 2006-03-10 ch 13, | abuseplease update ASAP! |