A great story. I liked the part where Sara found out what had happened to her mom.

Wow...that was, well agonizing from Sara's POV. Dark but a fabulous idea.

I didn't understand you fanfic. Who were the people Sara was talking about? What did Grissom mean when he said he has her and that he's in California? And what did Brass mean when he said "she finally broke"? Is that the end of the story?

Anyway, besides that, the story was good!

oh my goodness! wow... i'm speechless... that was amazing. ~jL

This is the most beautiful, haunting piece of fiction I have read in a long time. the only bad part was the fact that it ended. I want more! I love anansay's writting, but this story just blew me away. Keep up the good work!

Wow. I'm really not sure what else to say. This is deep, a little bit disturbing in a way. Not a bad way, not disturbing as in freaky and wierd. Disturbing as in wow. Something that I didn't expect. Great job.

Great story. Very emotional. Good work to capture such intensity in a short amount of time.

Holy crap, honey that was really something. You are able to capture fear, which is incredibly difficult to do. Descriptive, yet you don't pull from the stroy in doing so. Wow, bloody marvelous!

o Good one!

Wow -- You pack a punch with just a few words. That was incrediby powerful.

Very powerful and hauntingly poetic. Nicely done, gave me goosebumps!

Aww! That was beautiful and heartbreaking.

Oh, the angst, the angst! :(
I'm so happy to see your muse is back, and what a comeback!
This reads like a first part of a series, hope you know what *that* means...

I always love your stories, your writing is amazing. I look forward to reading more of your musings.

This is absolutely perfect. I don't know why you're so hard on yourself, you're a great writer : ) Loved the ending.