Please update this fic soon.

this story is really intriguing and really to different and dark for my choice but i still wanted to read it

I really like this story, and I don't know if you forgot about it, but it would be really awesome if you could update soon! :D

OMG what is it with evil dumbledore trying to kill harrys baby? that man is a loony and should be shot. i hope serverus comes to his sences and harry takes him back

it was getting good update again soon

forgot to review the last chapter. ok so here goes. That was a very cruel thing for Sev to do to Harry. i do not think i can forgive him for a while now. but this story hooked be just from the story description thing a ma bobber. (weird wording huh?? :) ). anyways... good story so far.

oh i guess i would leave to if they took my baby and i didnt knkow what to do oh well i hope that severus finds harry

good story- cant believe dumbles wood be willing to kill a newborn babe- hope harry gets revenge on him!

will he find harry? who knows? please update soon!

Good story update soon

please up date this fic so I can see
if Harry rasies his and get him back
I hope Snape finds him soon. When
you up date email me at

Wonderful and amazing chapter. Where did Harry go and can Severus find him?

Aww... That wasn't very nice of Harry to do so... Right?
Update!

gyah! now this is starting to be a good story! update! is severus going to take the baby now until he finds harry and never return to hogwarts? UPDATE!

You've got quite a few errors in your story. You should get a beta reader to help you with your grammar and sentence structure. You've got a lot of incomplete and run-on sentences.