Great story. Keep it up!

If I have read this before you have submitted the last chapter I would say: YOU'RE A VERY GOOD WRITER, UPDATE SOON OR I WILL MAKE ONE YOSHI THAT HAS ALL OF THE FEATURES YOUR YOSHIS HAVE! but submitted it so i will say: good chap, keep it up!

good. keep it up!

Good chapter. But since MY got no much vitality, won't he die because of so much heat?

Volcano erupts. It was too predictrable, and no, i didn't take the hint from the name of the chapter. Great chapter, keep it up!

Great suspenful chapter. I saw the name of the name of the chapters ahead, and I was annoyed because you use the names for short (such as Sy for Seismic Yoshi.) It's so confusing, but I still got the hang of it. It's just confusing.

It seems good, I'll start reading it right now.

all this story was about was a bunch of battles. there was no plot. And how the heck would yoshis just randomly appear and start to try and kill them? if you tweeked this story a lot it could be really good.

Bweep Sounds good so far!

This sounds pretty good so far. The chapters seem a tad short, but that's probably just me.