|Reviews for Atomo World Disaster|
| snowboarder9 2/8/06 . chapter 11
Great story. Keep it up!
| snowboarder9 2/8/06 . chapter 10
If I have read this before you have submitted the last chapter I would say: YOU'RE A VERY GOOD WRITER, UPDATE SOON OR I WILL MAKE ONE YOSHI THAT HAS ALL OF THE FEATURES YOUR YOSHIS HAVE! but submitted it so i will say: good chap, keep it up!
| snowboarder9 2/8/06 . chapter 6
good. keep it up!
| snowboarder9 2/8/06 . chapter 5
Good chapter. But since MY got no much vitality, won't he die because of so much heat?
| snowboarder9 2/8/06 . chapter 4
Volcano erupts. It was too predictrable, and no, i didn't take the hint from the name of the chapter. Great chapter, keep it up!
| snowboarder9 2/8/06 . chapter 2
Great suspenful chapter. I saw the name of the name of the chapters ahead, and I was annoyed because you use the names for short (such as Sy for Seismic Yoshi.) It's so confusing, but I still got the hang of it. It's just confusing.
| snowboarder9 2/8/06 . chapter 1
It seems good, I'll start reading it right now.
| nerdfest 3/7/05 . chapter 11
all this story was about was a bunch of battles. there was no plot. And how the heck would yoshis just randomly appear and start to try and kill them? if you tweeked this story a lot it could be really good.
| Shadow Kitsune Kirby 2/7/05 . chapter 8
Bweep Sounds good so far!
| Shadow Kitsune Kirby 2/2/05 . chapter 4
This sounds pretty good so far. The chapters seem a tad short, but that's probably just me.