okay, I admit: cute! And gotta love Alfred!

That was odd But good i really liked it, my mind got a bit messed up for a second cause i thought it was a young dick with all the school work but obviously not that young

I like cheese, especially melty cheese, and this was definatley warm and fuzzy enough to make melty cheese. The only thing I will say to the negative is...it's not long enough. Can I have some more, please. Sorry for the Oliver Twist moment. *shrinks into corner but not before grabbing the pink envelopes (that was a cute idea)*

Now, my extreme and utter amusement could have something to do with the fact that it's four thirty in the morning, and I haven't even thought about going to bed or studying for the math test I have to take in four hours, but I'm pretty sure it's more because of the fact that this is awesome. I love Alfred. Always have. Always will, and I love the way you pictured him. The cuteness was awesome (but, then again, I'm a sucker for cheesy tasties). So yeah. Yay Batman! _

*snerk* Pink. Paper. Bats.

Bwahahahahahaha! Very cute and sweet, and surprisingly in character for all that.

/"He is of legal age, I approve, and I know you two feel more for each other than you admit even to yourselves. Enjoy your dinner, and let an old man gloat."/

I *love* Alfred!

Hmm... twas cheesy, but cheesy in a way that I did not expect it to be, therefore it wasn't. Oo Or whatever. I liked it. I'm surprised that Bruce didn't deduce the real sender before Robin did, but then again, maybe his feelings got in the way. Woo.

he he he - loved it

It was cute!

Adorable! Absolutly adorable! GO ALFRED! Sneaky man...

*shrug* I'm a Batman fan courtesy of my eldest bro, and I do like slash - even if I don't have the guts to post anything actually containing slash/shonen-ai/whatever you want to call it... actually, don't have the guts to post much of anything.

But anyway. I guess what I was saying shortly before I got distracted, was that I've never really considered the two to go together, although considering how you can put slash to anything, I suppose I should have.

I liked your characterisation of poor-longing suffering Alfred (aka wily old goat *grin*) and I thought the idea of pink paper bats was... funny (I think that's the word I'm looking for anyway). Well-written, funny in parts... blah, I'm sorry. I'm just in a totally random mood. x_x

it was a very cute story tll the end i hate slash storys sorry but i do so i hated this story sorry weel written