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| pixie paramount 2005-09-29 ch 1,  | abuseyour writing is impecable. |
| totallystellar 2005-07-26 ch 1, | abuseWOW I LOVED THIS! Amazing writing, amazing premise. Great job. Loved the reactions of everyone... I would have liked more of Piccolo's reaction (seeing as how Piccolo was sort of Gohan's mentor), but seeing it from Vegeta's point of view was still great. Can you say faves? Cause I can! ^_~ |
| curiousmind 2005-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was quite intriguing; my congradulations on a well written short. |
| Lights Dying Fire 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abuseNo intention aon flaming what so ever! Wow, this was put together really well! A captivating story. I like fics like that, only I seem incapable of finding them. Hope to see this continued soon. |
| Golden Warrior12 2005-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseIn the words of a dear friend: It is to beautiful for mere words to explain. |
| The General of Darkness 2005-03-03 ch 1, | abusefor a lack of a more intelligent word: WOW. This chapter...however short it was...is matchless. I've always been drawn to "power-can-consume-the-saiyan" fics, and this is one of the more well-written ones. However, there is one outstanding thing i must give notice: this paragraph- "My body is only half human, and half saiya-jin. I am not a God. I cannot sustain this growing force... this hidden power. It's like a fire, and no one is immune to fire. Fire burns. It tears flesh." That alone drew me in. I do hope you plan to continue this. Please update soon... Ja ne! -Da General |
| Garowyn 2005-02-03 ch 1, | abuseExcellent work. Ki can also be spelled chi, like it is in the manga. |
| Brutal2003 2005-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really don't have anything bad to say, just wondering if your going to continue because you've peaked my curiosity. |
| Anime-Ronin 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abusehmm, not bad - I hope to see more of this fic in the future (read this to mean 'VERY soon'). I wonder, will Goku see any of this and feel the guilt he should feel hit him like Chi-chi's Frying Pan of Doom? |
| Mutou Yasu 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseWow... I really liked the way you wrote that... ^_^ It was kinda odd, but I thought it was a wonderful story... ^_^ |
| lpgohanfanatic 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseVery good. Great job! Are you going to continue this story? |
| dee-unlm1t3d 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseIt is a good story, but I have one question? Is this a one shot? Because it seems like it. Still is good though. One shot or not, you inadvertantly portrayed Gohan's reason for not training. |
| Marochre Iatrone 2005-02-01 ch 1, | abuseWell, it was well written, even though it confused me a bit ^^ I know you've edited it, but I think the differences are something only you will notice, so I'll just review this one! It is very, very good, and it shouldn't surprise me that it's about Gohan. In fact, it DOESN'T surprise me. So ha. LOL. |