Update...NOW! I want to see what happens, I must see what happens. YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! YOU CAN'T WRITE SOMETHING SO GOOD AND THEN LEAVE IT!

This is beautiful. Please continue it; I can't wait for the "meet the family" part. ;)

Happy writing,
GC

This is a lovely piece. Thank you for geting it out of your brain.

I find it amazing that at the tender age of 16 you were able to so succinctly put in words the scope of love and all of its conotations. At the tender age of 40, I sit here and absorb it all in rapt concentration.

Your characterazation ( forgive the spelling. I live on spell check ) for Jareth was beautiful for the type of Jareth you needed to portray. You blended in the paradox of love and teasing cruelty perfectly.

I have a bit of trouble believing a 16 year old Sarah not having at least 3 tantrums, if not out of frustration, then because of the hormones. Hell, hormones still run rampant with me and I've gone through 5 pregnancies !

Again, thank you for sharing this.

If you don't keep writing this story I will kill you! I must have more. I have cried and laughed and wept over this story so far. Keep the emotional rollercoaster coming!

I wish you would update, I know you are probably busy but, I miss this story so much.

It's been a while... Updated or no, this remains a wonderful collection of moments and emotions and superb writing.

This is a beautifully written story, and it saddens me to see that it hasn't been updated since last year...
I hope you return to this fanfiction soon, with ideas anew to finish this piece!

Uhm, yeah, you really need to update, Don't you think you have tortured us long enough. You arent going to be one of those people who writes this amazingly wonderful story then suddemly drops off the face of the earth. Because I love this story much to much to let you stop writing it. Please update some time soon.

*snort*

"'so, why do you talk with a South London accent?'

Jareth blinked, taken (for once) by surprise, 'Why? Don't you like it?'"

...absolutely hilarious. Please, continue!

omfg that was amazing!! totaly addictive please update soon. the plot is complex and your writing flows with imagination and creativity. you are a great writer. you have encaptured a plot that i hadnt ever even considered to be possible. and remarkably you have kept them in their characters. a very good effort and i hope to see much more of you.

This is a wonderful story idea. There are few fics I've found that deal with Jareth and Sarah having children, and that's something that I love to read about. And "Evil Jareth" is just so hot! You do a wonderful job kepping them in character. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Dude, this is good. I am so enjoying this. Can't wait till you update some more!

i like it. i think my favorite thing about this story is that he isn't soft and sweet. i think you have managed to capture his personality quite well. not that i don't like the ones where he is sweet, i just htnk that this is the way he is supposed to be. keep up the great work!

I was very pleasantly surprised for you to update. This is an absolutely enthralling story- it is progressing nicely. I look foward to Sarah's parents', especially her father's, reactions to Jareth. Jareth is remarkably in character just the perfect touch of emotion and that regal aloofness, that nonchalance that holds him above ordinary people. Sarah's final acceptance of her own emotions was very realistic. You haven't made her too childish or too adult- but the perfect combination of the two. Sarah is a teenager, with all the confusion that such a designation implies. I normally don't write reviews, I have too much bad luck, because when I wrote reviews before, all my favorite authors seemed to disapear off the face of the web. So, I am writing this, hoping that it will be encouragement, and ensure that you update soon.

Why did that not LINK, damnit?!
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--official Labyrinth sequel in graphic novel form, teenage Toby is Jareth's heir--WHOOT!