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| MyPotter 2005-12-24 ch 1,  | abuseu know, u should make this a chapter story wiht all those bold unerlined things at end. |
| pandas rule the world 2005-06-22 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, Luv JoeyX |
| Muzzy-Olorea 2005-02-06 ch 1, | abuseHeya! I read another story about L/J and the whole 'when pigs fly' thing but yours was very good as well. This isn't a criticism, just a pointer. This story was mostly dialogue and in terms of style of writing, I think that BTEOTH is better written than this, purely on the fact that you have dialogue balanced with description in that story which increases the tension and the atmosphere etc. As a one-shot, I understand that this was just a one-off fun thing to write and you write beautifully anyway so I'm just gotta shut up now ... lol. I hope for another one-shot soon! |
| Hogwarts-fanatic91 2005-02-05 ch 1, | abuseloved it! the ending was really cute... |
| Destany Mitchell 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseaww, that was cute! I would like to see more, but it does have a nice ending... |
| Newbie GK 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was funny and not to mention an interesting story. I love the idea behind it (using the expression of 'when pigs fly' I mean) |
| KyLewin 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseHaha, that was pretty funny. Who knew that such a simple cliche saying could turn around and bite Lily in the butt so quickly. Very nicely done. |
| ravioli and chocolate 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abusethat was ace |
| Red Bess Rackham 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseGood, VERY good. :D I liked it alot! |
| Flavagurl 2005-02-02 ch 1, | abuseAW!! THAT WAS THE SWEETEST LITTLE FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ! HONESTLY! I love the way u ended it! I really hope to be reading more of your stories soon!! GOOD LUCK! MUAH MUAH |