Reviews for Ragnarok Chronicles

Reviews For: Ragnarok Chronicles

Ivan Chan 2007-03-15 ch 1,	abuseNice Story though isnt it long since this story was updated at all is this story discontinued ?
Minister of Ragnarok 2005-12-08 ch 2, anon.	abusewow.. thats a great story... that beast sound like hatii or baby hatii (the ice beast monster)... i hope yuffa is ok... hehe keep goin.. this will be the great story with 3 adventures on thier journey... Haru Glory - Great Job!!
:) 2005-04-03 ch 2, anon.	abusehey...nice story you've got going there..can't wait for the next chapter! although can you lay off Yuffa and Roan all the time arguing? it's kinda destroying the romance part of the story :D
Kairi 2005-02-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseNice start to your fic, although there may be a few things you may want to work on, especially since your story shows some promise. First of all, before you start writing, it is extrememly important that you at least get your character names right - I am fairly certain that "Yuufa" is the correct spelling, because if you happen to be able to read some Japanese, you will see that her name would be spelt like that in English. Also, the personality of the characters, if you are indeed basing it on the anime, are a little off, especially the conversation between Roan and Yuufa in the second chapter. If you notice in the anime, Roan is extremely devoted to Yuufa, and would absolutely not even think about saying a single thing bad about her. It is only later once he has achieved the class of Crusader that he becomes a little more aware of other people's (Yuufa's) faults. Anyhow, as I mentioned earlier, a nice start to your story, and please do not take what I said in an offensive way, I have no intention of offending you or your writing skills, but are merely trying to help you maybe become a better author. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Kairi 2005-02-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseNice start to your fic, although there may be a few things you may want to work on, especially since your story shows some promise. First of all, before you start writing, it is extrememly important that you at least get your character names right - I am fairly certain that "Yuufa" is the correct spelling, because if you happen to be able to read some Japanese, you will see that her name would be spelt like that in English. Also, the personality of the characters, if you are indeed basing it on the anime, are a little off, especially the conversation between Roan and Yuufa in the second chapter. If you notice in the anime, Roan is extremely devoted to Yuufa, and would absolutely not even think about saying a single thing bad about her. It is only later once he has achieved the class of Crusader that he becomes a little more aware of other people's (Yuufa's) faults. Anyhow, as I mentioned earlier, a nice start to your story, and please do not take what I said in an offensive way, I have no intention of offending you or your writing skills, but are merely trying to help you maybe become a better author. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Dragon and Sword Master 2005-02-13 ch 2,	abuseAfter seeing the whole series, I must differ with the image that you are making out of Roan. Sure he was somewhat of a bafoon at the beginning, but didn't he have some good points of being a swordsman, as well as being a crusader? Also, what type of wind is a Haru?
Rachelle 2005-02-09 ch 2, anon.	abuseThe story shows promise, but don't forget to put in a bit of a romance thingie as in the Animation, that was where it headed anyway. Maybe a dream sequence?
Dragon and Sword Master 2005-02-07 ch 1,	abuseA very good start Ravemaster. I like that show as well, and I can't wait to see what else is in store for this story. I thought there would be a game out for it, since the anime looks a lot like an RPG game, but is it in America or just in Japan?

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