Did Syndrome capture Mr.Incredible before he died? Mr.I can't be dead. It's a good story. But don't forget about it and not update. I hate it when that happens.

yay! i forgot all about this until I was going through my reveiw history. Wisdom teeth out? not fun. Hope to see another chapter!

this fic's not dead is it? I'm still waiting to see what comes next...

Great chapter! The story about Mr. Incredible's death isn't going to be put out until later, after the series i'm working on right now, so thanks for the advice! Update very VERY soon please!

I'm still getting ready to kidnap you. That way I can sit you in front of the computor and FORCE you to write so that you'll get the next chapter out! This was a great one!

this is great, cant wait to read more!

Whoohoo! Finally an Incredibles fanfic that I like. Thankyou so much this is awesome. I love the names you gave Jack and Violet, and "killing" Bob? Great twist. Please dont stop writing, I wanna see how this ends.

Wow great chapter. So they never found Mr. Incredibles body? Are we gonna see the classic super hero return from the dead bit? And if so how will this affect his family?

Whoa! You really don't disappoint at all! Two chapters I had to bear, and I say that because it really was difficult to get through the last paragraphs on chapter 2, (same reason as everybody else) me really I'm going with the very unique names you’ve gave them. You really captures the whole original mood of the movie in this fic and accurately drawn up how the ‘supers’ have changed over the years. To be honest I don’t miss bob as much as I thought I might have. Keep this up, you have to, because that cliff hander really slapped me in the face, if you know what I mean.

Now about the question, I have had a not such a good part of sharing my opinions. Let’s just say, a few of my decisions got my into trouble and my un-dented record broken by my actions. Therefore, I have chosen to remove my identity giving myself a name of no-names (so to speak) though I like to stay anonymous, most of the time, I really cannot resist the urge to speak up in particular cases. I never read books (unless on screen) its mostly factual I’m interested in. But I’m finding myself greatly appealed to theses fictions, and I figured that because I’m actually interested. I don’t know how to define a fan but I’m greatly into ‘The incredibles” I browse around fan fictions and fan art, I have the movie on my computer, (there I go… rule breaking again!) but it won’t stop me getting the DVD. I really must close this now (getting very long, for a review) maybe I should make a profile here after all, but I cannot guarantee I’ll write anything, I’m working on a new revolutionary fanfic’s where my fic’s are read along with a soundtrack, but their certainly not long descriptive stories like this. I’m more into script writing and scene… imagining – LoL.

"Please, please, no autographs!"

You're definatly doing him justice, by the way. :)

Cliffhanger!
Must... Not... Kidnap.. Author!

So much emotional pain in this chapter. The dream sequence was great. I always try and steer away from that type of storytelling since it sometimes feel fake or cliche. But you used that great.

The characters are really working well here. Helen and her refusal to let go of hope, Dash and his anger and pain, and then Violet with that sense that she gave up a long time ago. It was so hard to read but I didn't want it to end.

Please update soon! I'll be waiting patiently.

ah, i can feel the pain. helen wasn't as hard to imagine because, as you said, she hasn't changed much, and for some strange reason, it's easy for me to hear pain in my head. nice chapter (i knew there would be a cliffie... i saw all of the signs... yet i was still filled with the same frustration i feel when one just sneaks up on me...) i do think that dash was... too expressive? from what i've seen, guys generally don't express their emotions as much, and to add to that, he's a superhero with a tragedy in the family, so thinking about that, i would see him as less open than what i've seen so far. but what do i know? i just hope to read the next chapter soon; this is a story that's really got me hooked

I thought that it was nicely done. Smooth writing, good pacing. Overall I'd have to say that this story is turning out great. Keep up the good work Sean!!
By the way, I hope that you're feeling better! Being sick at home might be great for writing, but not too good if you're really sick.
See you later!! ^_^

Hey Sean, Great chapter! I know I haven't actually seen the movie, but so far your story is making sense to me. My bet would be because you're a great writer. But that's only my opinion. Keep up the great work!

By the way - you missed this in your edit. ^_^
"I figured you be late for dinner, but I knew it wasn't like you to forget. I had a feeling you'd be asleep. You looked warn-out* when you got home."

*worn-out

This seems better than mine would probably be! Well, you know the drill! Update very VERY soon please!