 Empyrea 2009-03-29 . chapter 11this story is good
so please don't us hanging here
please update |
 Sirius-Black-is-not-dead 2009-01-23 . chapter 11MAN! You leaving this on a cliffhanger? What a way to stop making a fic. *sulks in a corner* |
 XthirteenX 2008-10-27 . chapter 11i love it so much plese write more son plese! i love the idea too! |
 Ashka-chan 2008-08-28 . chapter 11Nice story. I like how discibe thing, pretty nice :)
You should update this ;)
~Ashka |
 k.y.h.sakura 2008-05-13 . chapter 11hey
i have been waiting for the update but it never come
please just update i want to know waths next
this story is very interesting
please update soon
see ya
pt.
im fron mexico and cant speack very goob english |
 Angel-chan 2008-02-19 . chapter 11 That was a great chapter!
I hope you update soon! |
 Hatake Shiko 2007-11-07 . chapter 11I forgot about this fic @.@ I will be putting it on my thumbdrive to read ^^; btw, I am the 200th review ^_^
One shot? *puppy dog eyes* or the next chapter will do ^_^
Love,
Shiko
ps Don't kill me |
 Ducky 2007-10-29 . chapter 11 I just found this story recently but I love it. It has an intresting plot and I may not be a good writer but you have a good style too. Please try to update. |
 XDaSceneX 2007-09-03 . chapter 1great great great!! ^.^ |
 AikoNamika 2007-08-03 . chapter 11*smiles*
I was re-reading this fic and I wanted to tell you just how much I really do enjoy it. The whole thing has an interesting plot, at least as far as has happened so far, and the character interactions are dead-on. Or at least so I believe.
About the only complaint I have is that, at least in the earlier chapters, you switch back and forth between present and past tense without warning, often in the middle of a sentence.
This doesn't feel rushed, at least to my mind. Instead, it reads sort of like a mini-arc in the transitory stage between two larger arcs. A side-quest, if you will, at least on the part of the 02 Digidestined, and on the part of Kouji and Kouichi as well. That's possibly because it's only the two of them instead of the entire Frontier gang.
I am curious as to what happens next - I'd forgotten that Kouji had left his digivice behind until I read this. I'll admit to daydreaming as to what might happen next, though I imagine that most of it is far off of the mark. I don't know if you will be updating this story again, but if you are...well, I just wanted to let you know that you still have at least one loyal reader who really appreciates the effort that you've put into this work.
Thank you for publishing it in the first place! |
 WingedIsis16 2007-07-30 . chapter 11Ok I read this story a long time ago and liked it but never reviewed, I'd love if you finished the story
Wings |
 Darkness Within 2007-07-01 . chapter 11 Oh please! You have to write more! Its such a cliffhanger!
T.T
I read this voer and over again, hopign that next chapter will be there soon! So please! PLEASE! Don't discard this story!
I know your having a hard time writing, I do that alot as well, but letting a story die is the worst crime possible! Only the original writer can bring out the true feeling of their storys!
So please! Don't give up yet and finish writing this!
And any of your other unfinished works! Only you can bring these stories to life! So please... please do! |
 storylistener 2007-07-01 . chapter 11This seems interesting. Please WRITE MORE SOON! |
 Kuroy 2007-04-26 . chapter 11please do you continue this fic?
i hope so, someday perhaps x3 |
 Rael-Lirdu 2007-01-13 . chapter 11This is really good! Why'd you leave it at such a cliffhanger? I want to know what happens to Kouji! Will their secret be revealed? Please, please UPDATE! |