Ooh, he dies! Well, I guess that wraps it up! Pretty exciting conspiracy theory all round, enjoyed it very much! Thanks.

This is really great! I love all the twists and turns. Keep going.

This is a lot of fun to read, I really enjoy the twists and turns. Not big into ship so I'm glad you've kept that part on the light side. Never really did like Dr K, and he makes a wonderful bad guy.

That was great! loved Sheppard's line"I'm going to pass out now. You're in charge."

Great! I love all your quips and the timing! Keep going, can't wait to hear more!

haha, love the scottish women line. get better, shep! ;)

Oh I so want to see what you do to Kavanaugh! - wraith infested planet is too good for him, would be too quick an end to him, besides, he'd probably give the wraith food poisoning! - update soon, this is good...

You promised more- we're dying here !

Ok - definately hooked! - really interested to see where this goes! - please update soon, great plot!

Kavanagh has really done it this time. I say find a Wraith planet and stick him on it! After he helps the Major of course. Drastic I know but he's hurt the Major!

Love this chapter, looking forward to the next.

hi

are you planning to write any more chapters of thos story cos its really good and i would like to read more :D

sophie

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Good story so far. I never did like Kinsey, he's a real snake and I wouldn't put it past him to have planted men in the Atlantis team. Bates wasn't too bad, just doing his job but Kavanagh, I didn't like him at all.

Looking forward to where this story is heading.

WOW - this is so good, I can't wait for your next update. Please make it soon!

Love your writing style and you have really chaptured the charcters through their words and behaviour. Brilliant :)

i could so picture kavanagh slicing his own shoulder. what a slime. keep it up!

very good, please continue