This chptr was kind of gross...

This is very good!

EW! Ewy! Eww! You had me hopping up and down shaking my hands when i read the part about the dead bodies in the water. And then when Mirage fell in! *shudder so very gross* Great imagery there that definately had me furiously rubbing my ankles to get rid of leeches. (as if a person could get any whilst sitting at a computer.) Keep up the good work and use of descriptive narritive. And now i'm off to read the rest. Wanna see what happens to Mirage and all that stuff.

this story is spectactular! it lives up to the level of character development and adventure that 'the incredibles' set, and boy, does it ever do that! mirage is so cool! and i love her power! i've been wondering and wondering what mirage's power could be and how she would act in a story of her own, and this story answered every question of mine. (somebody call brad bird.)

waiting for the sequel, as always. keep on writing!

*gives a standing ovation* Bravo, bravo! This story was so excellent, so mind blowing, so amazing (please insert more synonyms of greatness here) that I stand all amazed! From a writer to a writer, you have some serious talent and should definately stick to this as you are obviously so gifted at it!

And there are more reasons to love you! I ADORE Rammstein and Reise, Reise was the first song that got me into the group! (And by the way, I also love Metallica and Pink Floyd too!) Too sweet!

I anxiously await a second story from you on Mirage with bated breath! (Hurry and write before I suffocate!)

hey, chapter 3, smoke and mirrors... is that referring to the song, by skye sweetnam? i never really find anyone else who knows who she is, so i'm just wondering.

BTW... i think it's a really good song.

i really like the fic, it's... well, i'm not sure bout the adjective, but its' good! keep writing!

J'ai adoré ton histoire!Ton concept de comment Mirage s'est échappée de Nomanisan est génial!Moi aussi j'ai acheté le DVD le jour de sa sortie!Une simple suggestion:Ce serait bien si tu pouvais faire une traduction de ta fanfic en francais.
Lâche pas!Continue de faire du bon travail!

X3 oh I feel spwecial! Yay and o_o aw already done? >.< poops...

Woah, so much interesting stuff about you @_@

Amazing story, and I can't wait for your next one! Mirage is definately my favorite character as well, though for different reasons... and I was also disappointed there were so few Mirage stories online. So thanx! When your site's up, are you going to post the address on your bio?

Re: "I feel I must stress the fact that I am not a writer, as I always felt powerless with words, both in English or French."

Let me tell you, you are most definately a writer, and by no means powerless. You should write an original piece sometime, 'cause then you'd own all the rights to get it published.

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congratulations on a very good ending to an excellent story, i know u probably get tired of hearing from me so many times, but i have nothing bad to say about your work. I cant wait to read the next story I am looking forward to it ^_^!

Aw man. Over already?? Awesome job on the story!! It's in my favorites!! O and this is still Mirage. If you can tell by the syndromesgirlXOXO.lol O and thanks for mentioning me ^_^

hello, griffin queen (my horrible abbreviation) here, and i have to congratulate you once again on a really good (once again horrible word choice) story. you are a very talented wirter, and it was a pleasure to read your story. you are definately going on my favorite authors list ^_^, i'd like to hear back from you (im obsessed with mirage, she rox) l8er

wow. amazing. well-written. as always.

I apologize for such a tardy review, I got quite busy over the past few weeks!

Yet ANOTHER brilliantly done chapter that kept me biting my nails and on the edge of my seat! And curses, you keep me in suspense!

I love the fact that Mirage had that file to disrupt everything on the island--I wish I had that kind of mad skill. And then she took control of the Omnidroid--TOO sweet!

Well done, well done!

I anxiously await another chapter!
Update soon, please!

Alright...NOW would be a REALLY good time for Mirage's "dead" former(?)boyfriend/partner in crime to show up and seriously kick Saunders' butt!

Please keep up-this story is really an edge-of-the-seater!

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