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| J Luc Pitard 2007-10-19 ch 16, | abuseAn interesting idea, the dream within a dream. I like how you kept the concept different by having it so detailed and tying it into the "reality." I was taken in by the plot switch and when she woke up in her sleeping bag I was prepared to cry foul until the next scene when Shippo was startled by her asking after the baby. Very well done. |
| jk 2006-04-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hate your title, it always makes me go "Oh my god DReam a Little Dream" (its is the most aesome book)then i realize its just your story. So now I'm finally gonna read it! :) |
| fieryleo15 2006-03-20 ch 12, anon. | abuseI'M SO CONFUSED!(SOBS) |
| LanierShazar 2005-12-04 ch 16, | abuseAwe that was awesome. I am so glad that they defeated him and everything turned out ok. |
| Tairoru-Chan 2005-10-28 ch 16, | abuseWell hury up iwth the epilouge ! |
| Black Betty 2005-10-23 ch 16, | abusewow...now that was quite the ending. |
| Strawberrys and whips 2005-09-25 ch 15, | abuseyour story is great at first i was kinda confused when they said kags was in a coma but then i caught on.please hurry and add another chappie |
| loren 2005-09-20 ch 15, anon. | abusethis is a really great story so far. are u going to be udating soon plz plz udate soon . ur doing a great job so far |
| bobalina 2005-08-16 ch 15, anon. | abuseQue precioso! Keep writing! Toodles, bobalina |
| LuLu 2005-06-30 ch 15, anon. | abusee! update soon! lalalalala! |
| serrinaus 2005-06-15 ch 11, | abusewow that was freaking awesome! i love this chapter |
| KiKi A La Mode! 2005-06-12 ch 6, anon. | abusei luv ur story so x 1 0 0 0 MUCH! please update soon! ur biggest fan, KiKi A La Mode! |
| fire 2005-06-10 ch 15, anon. | abuseso soo cute!i HAVE been WAITING for them to mate forever! that is so sweet! i can not wait until the battle!! PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE THIS STORY!! UPDATE |
| BECCA 2005-06-09 ch 15, anon. | abuse*tear* i am so happy that they are together and happy. but i cant wait to see what will happen when she gives her soul away for teperary uses. though i am confused as to why they couldnt use her body and fuse the other soul.? but i am still glad they are together!^_^ |
| LanierShazar 2005-06-09 ch 15, | abuseWow, soo much horror and bliss in one chapter. I hope that they are not asking too much of Kagome.. I dont know what inuyasha will do if he loses her... I think he will go insane with rage..and grief |