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excellent story ...sniff you made me cry

please write more

I'd like to read more when you write it!

update!update!update!update plz!

This is the first Daria story I have read, its really good, I love the character of Jane so please don't let anything bad happen to her! lol great story update asap!

I really hope you write more soon, I think it will be a good story once you get more into it. It would also be good if the chapters were longer unless you update more often. Well hope theres more in the near future.

This is GREAT! Can't wait for more! (The end of the school year is the worst, isn't it?) Don't worry...It will be over soon. Then you can get back to things you enjoy, lol. Keep it up. You're doing great. And remember-Rome wasn't built in a day.

-*angel*-

Okay, so, I'm squealing with delight. Seriously, I'm SO glad you updated this! It's great, and I can't wait for the next installment. Hope you find the time to write it soon *hint hint*. :oD

Why anyone would berate you in review I may never understand. You have an excellent start to what may be a really great story. Yes, the characters are out of character but given the situation, it would be wrong if they weren't. If you can react normally to something like that, then you're either really drugged, or you really didn't care as much as you said. Now do all of us a huge favor and post the rest of the story. PLEASE!

-*angel*-

I think this story is great so far can't wait to read more

OH, come on, this is too short!
I need MORE!

Well, I like it. Although they are a little out of character, people react differently in situations like that. Besides even on the show Daria shows some emotion, especially in the last season I think anyway. But oh well, it's good, keep it going.

So far so good, but I'd really like to see longer parts before I can make a good judgement. It feels like the story has just started when it ends, looking for a review. I really liked your other vignettes--let some of your ideas show through.

Oh, God, Jane's not going to die is she? Not that... anything but that...

I think I can breathe again now. Sappy? Yes. OOC? Yes. Wonderful? Yes! I LOVE this (not one to worry too much about staying in character, myself ;oD ) I really hope you update again soon, I may die if you don't. :oD

in responce to Wildgoose1. I can understand that, and i can see why it woukd be. but i can honsetly vow that i, myself, had had never read one.

this was more of a story that just popped into my mind almost fully formed, and more for background purposes for soemthing i wanted to use in another
story.

But thanks for reading it anyway. Glad you thought it was ok. :)
Kai

Not a bad begining, ...though the topic itself where one of the characters is critically injured and might not last the night is well over done.