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| smithcrafter 2007-07-01 ch 2, | abuse"Sweet." |
| cinderella2122 2006-07-17 ch 2, | abuseaw is that it is there like a sequil? please say yes *pouts* JJ:P |
| Soccer-Bitch 2005-04-07 ch 2, | abusecool story. i liked it. ^_^ |
| Kitsune Katana 2005-03-03 ch 2, | abuseUpdate! |
| SGAngeL 2005-02-05 ch 2, | abuseGreat story! |
| mew-xena 2005-02-04 ch 2, | abuseI always grin whenever I read anything about Jack's cabin, cause I live in Minnesota. Go Minnesota! We have a cabin up here to and I was imagineing them in a cabin a bit like mine, so it made it very realisitic! VERY GOD! GREAT WRITING! ^_^ |
| janissima 2005-02-04 ch 2, | abuseVery enjoyable! Would have liked a "little" romance but, hey, you were sticking with the true character of the show! As a born and bred Minnesotan, I would have to agree with Jack that Minnesota is a great place to be! :) |
| froggy0319 2005-02-04 ch 2, | abuseCan't get a freshly showered Jack out of my mind ;) Thanks for the imagery! Really enjoyed this. |
| Kate McCaye 2005-02-04 ch 2, | abuseGreat story, I really enjoyed it. I wish there was a little epilogue where Daniel found out what had been going on though, maybe something to do w/ him asking how Jack hurt his finger. |
| sjshipshipper 2005-02-04 ch 2, | abusegood chap. good story. you could do a follow up with daniel and sam LOL! |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2005-02-04 ch 2, | abuseGreat chapter. |
| WarmTea 2005-02-04 ch 1, | abuseIt is good, it is well written, and the characters stay true. Update soon!! |
| ChibiConfettiQueen 2005-02-03 ch 1, | abuseAh! Yes! Minnesota! (I live in the state if ya can't tell, right smack dab in the middle) Ah! Catch fish? Sure. I think you kinda have to have been born and raised in MN to catch anything. I've only lived here for 5 years and the best I ever caught were northerns, nice sized, but only northerns, no bass what-so-ever. Very very sad. Hm, ~reads~ the first city they flew into would be the St. Paul/Minneapolis airport, then the charter flight you mentioned would've brought them to St. Cloud. (it's in the center of the state) Supplies? Most likely at Fleet Farm. Can get alot of stuff there, including junk food. :P That's my guess anyway. I hope they drove a few hours north. That's where the only half-decent places are at, or so I've been told. Carter's taking her laptop on the lake?! Is she crazy? She DOES know boats can flip over, right? Right? Nah, water was reason Teal'c didn't go? Oi! I'm more willing to bet it was the mosquitoes. They're absolutely horrid up north at the right time of year. Vicious. Absolutely vicious. Sounds like she's never been to MN before. Should tell her some Ole and Lena jokes. Tales about lutefisk, lefse, and all that good MN stuff. Srry if I'm just telling you things you already know, being I havn't a clue if you've lived/are living/have visited here before or not. I could tell ya a ton more but this is way long enough already, but hey! Any ?'s, I'll be glad to fill you in. I'm really enjoying this story so keep up the good work! |
| TLWROX 2005-02-03 ch 1, | abusePlease continue! I like this so far. :) :) :) |
| janissima 2005-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVery humorous! Can't wait for more and hopefully a few "shippy" moments! |