nice one, though kinda ooc, s in, they didn't really remind me of kenshin and kaoru, but were fine characters in their own right. kinda like someone possessing K&K's bodies...ANYWAY. good story otherwise, and i did love the author's note. XD

Excelent one-shot! You did a very good job writing a short story! Great work!

What happened in Kenshin's past as a public prosecutor?

oh my! i'm suprised i haven't commented on this one yet. very tastefull lemon my dear, i do adore it so when kenshin calls her 'love,' its just so sweet and sexy! The story line is entertaining too, and only kaoru could meet her future lover by spilling food on them...

lol well thats one way for them to meet ;-)

Great fic...although the A/N at the end was the best part...LOL

Wonderful one-shot! Very well written and the plot is great. Lovely work!

SWEET. Lemon juice was raining down on them!

You have succeeded in giving an unprecedented massive nosebleed. Dear sweet cheeses that was teh HOT.

XD i love this story and i think u should do a sequal

that was wonderful. thanks for the read.

Oh how sweet!! And your writing was fantabulous =D Absolutely brilliantly written ^__^ Made everything worth-while to read. I adored how you portrayed Kenshin and Kaoru as characters. I loved the beginning, middle, and end. I loved how you made Kenshin a laywer (OMG I WAS SO SPAZZING OUT B/C KENSHIN SEEMED PERFECT AS A LAWYER IN REAL LIFE).

...*coughs* Excuse me. I just...lost composure for a bit...

Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, and I hope you write more KxK in the future! I'll be going off to read your current multi-chaptered KxK now ^__^

Wow...steamy!

very cute

nice