 indusina 2009-11-07 . chapter 34Won't you please update? This story is one of the best RK fanfics I've ever read and I'm begging you, on my hands and knees, to Please, PLEASE finish this story!
//Indusina |
 Ms Severus Kenobi 2009-10-31 . chapter 34I absolutely love this story! I love how you have put this in present day and I just love how you portray the characters! I hope that this review can help boost you into a writing frenzy. I don't know how long I can wait for an update until I explode! |
 kettish 2009-10-28 . chapter 34Wow, I just read through the entirety of this story so far! I've gotta say, I find Kenshin wicked out of character (far more Battousai than he ever was in the anime/manga, long term) but given he's a fully-fledged demon I suppose I shouldn't be surprised by that. LOL.
This story so far has been absolutely stuffed with moments and lines that make me *gigglesnort* to myself and receive odd looks for it; I like that. :D It's a sign of a good writer!
On the other hand, I've had a hard time keeping up with what, exactly, is happening in the plot, though to be honest that could be due to other outside circumstances not related to your fic. Nevertheless this is a review and I will mention it!
I'm absolutely in love with Misao and Aoshi together in this story; sometimes you meet someone and it's just freakin' love at first sight and you KNOW it. It's what happened with my husband and I and it's refreshing to see it in a fanfiction (especially a RK story!), where generally the order of the day is "Dance Around Each Other Until You & Everyone Else Get Dizzy."
I'm glad that you're still working on this, and I'm eagerly awaiting the rest of it...especially now that Kaoru's ADMITTED she likes Kenshin too! C:< Good job describing the stuff with the hospital and Kaoru's dad's injury btw, some people can't pull that off well and it comes off very fake/contrived. You sounded decently knowledgeable about it. Kudos!
Sorry if this review sound sort of stuck-up or stuffy, I'm trying to be constructive here while struggling to keep 30+ chapters in mind. ;) Remember that I really have enjoyed reading your story so far, and that I look forward to reading more!
Peace be with you, kettish. |
 clara954 2009-10-19 . chapter 34This story is beyond amazing. The encounters between Kenshin and Kaoru are my favorite. Please update again soon! |
 MoonsDaughterLuv 2009-10-17 . chapter 34-ahem- How exactly, does one go from weekly updates to absolutely none for two years? I am pulling my hair out at the roots wanting to read about the horrible cooking disasters that will wipe out a small country! By the way, is this country small in population or land? Anyway, Frozen Moonlight is so completely chock full of awesome cool-ness that my mind is reeling! And it wants to continue reeling (hint hint). Now I have a blowtorch and a singing shoe in my closet reserved for authors who spend extended periods of time not updating. Again, hint hint. |
 melcon 2009-10-10 . chapter 34This is such an amazing story - when will you finish it? I read this for the first time a few months ago and was writhing in frustration at the fact that it wasn't done. Please, please, please finish it! Please? |
 Ella 2009-09-12 . chapter 34 Ok, I'm going to try and put this as calm as possible...Please oh Please update! The way you blend one of the best manga's characters into an au story is just absolutely magnificent. I believe i have become addicted so i high just you update before i find some kind of random household object to kidnap and force you into writing >.> I'm sure most of your fans would agree with me :D Anyways, i seriously hope you haven't abandoned such a perfectly wonderful story. |
 Jellybean06 2009-08-14 . chapter 34this story is really a gem in the ruroken fandom...i don't usually like reading AU stories, but you really managed to keep everyone believable. and you manage to write the supernatural in with everyday life and just enough humor to keep me hooked.
i really really want to find out what happens next, so i hope you haven't abandoned this story.
update soon? please? |
 nessie6 2009-08-10 . chapter 12Since it is 2:19 in the morning, the review's going to be short, but I thought I'd just comment.
I love how Kaoru's personality shapes the narration--and it remains consistent throughout.
And last--the fact that you even used the name Fujita Goro had me immediately suspicious. So I am not suprised by the outcome of this chapter. Not disappointed though!
~nessie~ |
 SRAS9 2009-08-05 . chapter 34Great story! Please update! Good work! |
 ame 2009-07-11 . chapter 34 will this ever update? =( |
 Gabi1994 2009-06-29 . chapter 34i loved Megumi's proposal it was awsome. Kaoru's reaction was priceless "live a long and prosperous life. don't let the door hit you on the way out" (died laughing)so funny update soon ^_^ |
 Gabi1994 2009-06-27 . chapter 31your wicked sense of humor is getting me odd stares as i laugh uncontrolably while quietly reading online. ^_^ i love Kaoru's convoluted, rabling, and unbelivably hilarious mental rants. Kudos to you for her remarkably inventive uses of everyday house hold items as weapons and increadibly vivid descriptions of death to all who bug her. i love your work ^_^ |
 Seelenspiel 2009-06-26 . chapter 26Throughout the whole story I have wondered if it's even possible for Kaoru to trust Kenshin again. I mean... how would you know that some demon didn't just take delightful revenge on you because you have killed him. Wouldn't there always be some doubt there that all of his actions might just be some glorious payback? lol |
 jainga 2009-06-23 . chapter 34*poke poke* Sniffle?
I was updating my favorites list (eg: removing anything that wasn't complete and had gone longer than a year without updating.) I was horrified to see that this one now qualified!
I reread it and decided that it deserved pass.
This was not a nice place to leave us at. And I'd like to suggest that YOU read it and remind yourself of just how awsome you are! :) |