Great story, I really liked it!

cute... defientely cute...

Uhh..the story was kind of pointless. No real plot or anything definetly a strange fic.

Cool, Seto Kaiba's there! _ I'm a Yu-Gi-Oh fanatic if you can't tell. I would have been happier if it was Bakura but I guess Seto makes the most sense when it comes to business meetings and stuff like that.

I would say the prologue went extremely well, cause it is only a short piece, yet I am dying to read more. Hope you update soon!

Thanks.

VSM**

great beggining, it has a cliff hanger can't wait for Vege and Bulma's little talk

Its getting interesting. Excellent work. Update soon!

Ah, Seto Kaiba... ;)

You should space out the dialogue between characters. Otherwise it becomes confusing when one character says something, and then another character says something else and it's all in the same paragraph, plus it's proper story format.

Anyway, good start.