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Dominicius
2007-05-06 . chapter 2
Let me just say that I think this story is the best you have written so far. Yes, Stitch still seems a bit too Angsty for me but here it didn’t matter. This story actually makes you think, it has much more depth then any ordinary fanfiction I have read so far. And for me that counts above everything else.
Tragic warrior
2007-01-05 . chapter 5
At least the story had a happy ending for everyone, except Jumba who has to fix the kitchen. I couldn't imagine anything worst than never being able to die; death is another important part of the cycle that we all follow. Good story. If you give any of my stories a read review and tell me what you think.
Tragic warrior
2007-01-05 . chapter 3
Not bad. Too bad Lilo doesn't understand what Stitch is going through. Hopefully she'll find out before it's too late.
Tragic warrior
2007-01-05 . chapter 1
How can Pleakley call himself an Earth expert when he doesn't know something as simple not showing a child a gory movie. Oh well. Nice chapter.
ItsADog
2006-08-31 . chapter 5
This is the first FanFic that I have read about the idea of Stitch having a long lifespan. I did know about some others but didn't read them. After finishing the story, and reading how Stitch wouldn't be 'left behind', I wouldn't have thought of that phrase in such a way (now I do). Imagining Stitch looking at himself in the mirror at the end... a fitting end, "Nobody gets left behind." Perfect!
Da bigg guy
2006-04-05 . chapter 5
JUMP JUMP JUMP JUMP JUMP YEY OH. Very nice and well writen
TRFKAJSouRORSOFF
2006-03-12 . chapter 5
That was an excellent story, and a great resolution.
Loyal Lady Pisces
2006-01-17 . chapter 5
That was a very sweet thought provoking ending to a nice little fiction, I just can't believe I never got around to reading this. Hm just I accidently over looked it some how, anywho this was a wonderful read that was interesting for me to see just how your writing skill started. Very very nice indeed. :3> Hugs!
Loyal Lady Pisces
2006-01-17 . chapter 4
Wow now this chapter was scary especially when Stitch tryed to kill himself with the sword, I can now see how your amazing writing talent evolved into the masterpeices I read today. You have a very good play on emotions here and mood as well, this really shows in your later fics and better ever time you write. It's like I'm watching a movie. ^^"
Loyal Lady Pisces
2006-01-17 . chapter 3
I think Stitch is taking what Jumba said a little too hard, how does he know if it's true or not. Nobody knows what the future holds but I'm sure Stitch is going to find out the true sooner or later. I laughed when he threw the sandwich in 625's face, that was funny. XD
Loyal Lady Pisces
2006-01-17 . chapter 2
Very smooth and beleivable, Stitch now cursed to live on in this life without his Ohana for they will grow old while he remain young and have to say goodbye to all of them. To walk the earth alone would be more than I could bear either. :( Great stuff. :3
Loyal Lady Pisces
2006-01-17 . chapter 1
Hm I though I read all your fics but it looks like I missed one. XP *goofy fox* This is a very interesting fic to start off with, I've read most of this fics myself as well and am eager to see your first take on it, a very interesting point is brought up in it as I myself have often wondered what it would be like to live forever as well but I knew why not as well.
Venus23
2005-08-28 . chapter 1
Loved it! I'd never even considered Stitch's lifespan before, or how he would react to it. But this was beautifully done. Had me in tears.
Celebi
2005-06-21 . chapter 5
Aww. Having read a few other immortality fics, I have to say this is my favourite. 'Cause there's a better ending. Like you said, the other ones are just too darn depressing.

About half way through I thought maybe Jumba would end up inventing something to reduce Stitch's lifespan, but having the answer already there seems to work better. It also seems perfectly logical, the way Jumba thought of it - I would have done the same thing, trying to think what you would have done at the time, but forgetting a very important detail.

I liked the flash-forward thing, and how that was repeated. And I'm glad there wasn't anything completely outrageous to do with age affecting Stitch (I don't know what, but I get the feeling a novice could have royally messed that up somehow).

So apart from some teeny-tiny grammar/spelling accidents (I thought Pleakley had another e in it) you definitely did what you meant to - a perfect immortal Stitch story with a happy ending.

Still made me cry though...
Baal 626
2005-04-05 . chapter 5
Okay, I finally got around to reading this (peskey real world getting in the way).

Brilliant!

Stitch's lifespan is something I've always wondered about. Despite his indestructability, I've never really considered the possibility of him living for thousands of years. It just doesn't make sense to me why Jumba would need that kind of longevity in his creations.

Anyway, very good!
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