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Sorry, a bit too violent for me.

Oh, that is so beyond cool. ::grins:: The flow's pretty good, though the style reads sort of strange to me. Not bad, but strange. As it were, though, the story itself just tickles me to no end. It reminds me a lot of Perfect Dark, in a way, which me sis and I have speculated on a few different times.

Great work.

Oooooh, I loved it :) I love a story with a good twist! And that one had several! :) Very nicely done, kudos ;)

wonderful! everything was described so well and i liked the shock that it was a simulator game against buzz. very well done.

I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed this fic. I mean, it really doesn't need many of the elements from the show because the characterization is done so well. I had no problem visualizing this, and I think it's an interesting thought that Mira would enjoy using old-fashioned weaponery. Someone has to still like it, right?

For a sec there, I thought why the heck is she using an arrow...

I liked that one, even if I still haven't seen Buzz Lightyear yet, it was cool. _

You definately have a talent for writing, however (with the exception of using Buzz and Mira's names) I fail to see how this could be Buzz Lightyear of Star Command. Don't get me wrong, I like when people do their own thing with a show, but you have to include some aspects of characterization and situations from the show. This just seemed like I was reading the description of a rather violent video game.

This is a very good story.

I like this! Especially the twist at the end! Please to do write more Buzz Lightyear fics!

Rather good. However, perhaps you should build up a little more excitement at the beginning (that, or I'm in one of my moods again).

The ending was good, with the whole 'alive' thing.

-Noah.