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charleymiamore
2007-03-03
ch 2,
abuse...cute! it really takes me right at the very first chapter! Kenshin's really fumbling there, kaoru's...well...loud... and yahiko's really so indifferent on the surface but really has some intense emotions inside.
hope you update soon! and i mean really soon!

please? pretty please?
Miharu Kawashi
2006-10-01
ch 2,
abuseI really liked this chapter. The engagement was cute and Yahiko's reaction was priceless. I can't wait to see how Megumi reacts to the news. Hopefully she wont be too depressed. After all, I'm sure she's already sadened by the lost opportunity with Sano. Poor Megumi! I do sympathize. Ja ne!
Kaoru4
2006-09-30
ch 2,
abusegreat story! Kenshin seems like his absentminded self and Kaoru her boisterous self. ^_^ Can't wait to read more... things kinda seem to be falling apart for the Kenshin-gumi.
Rin-of-Light
2006-05-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is pretty Waffy! Please update soon. I hope he asks Kaoru because she sees it anyway.
Miharu Kawashi
2006-05-11
ch 1,
abuseI'm sorry to hear about your cousin's stories. SOme people are really touchy when it comes to plagurizing.

I like the story so far. I'm interested to see how you change the story around. Can't wait for the next update! Ja ne!
Quentin B. Caulfield
2006-02-11
ch 1,
abusethis is actually a really good idea. very insighful. i can't wait to see how you develop this, even if i know i'lljust wind up crying at the end!

Reflections made me cry! and i know you will too. haha. i look forward to it!

QBC.
skenshingumi
2005-11-13
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this opening chapter. Kenshin's worry over the rings, his concern for Sano, his stammering when Kaoru finds the rings all rang very true to the series both anime and manga. I thought you gave a good sense of everyone so far, they way Sano doesn't want to take the money even tough he really needs tit, his bear hug good byes, Yahiko's almost tears and Kaoru's retreating to her room to really cry. I look forward to more of this story even though it sounds form the summary that it will ultimately get quite sad.
Nicole (KK_Reflection)
2005-09-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseWonderful job explaining Sano's disappearance and the movements of the storeline. It was a nice touch, the scene where Kenshin gives up his money to Sano, even though it was for his wedding.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to more chapters. ^_^
Evening Lilacs
2005-04-21
ch 1,
abuseMes LURVES your story! PLEASE CONTINUE--SON!

Peace,
Eki
angelic-kuti
2005-03-13
ch 1,
abuseupdate plz!
i love angst. ^__^ hehe i'm weird.
anyways. plz update i wanna know wat happens!
kitsune
2005-03-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseHey nice story.I always wondered what would happend if Kaoru was the one to die!And now she probably thinks he is seeing another woman!Kaoru no baka!Update soon!
animeinsomniac
2005-02-05
ch 1,
abuseI like this so far. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching for more updates.
scythe195
2005-02-04
ch 1,
abuseAnother fantastic story! :) Love your writing! please continue soon!
Sagitarious Devil
2005-02-04
ch 1,
abuseI like it. I hope you continue soon!
ttyl, bibi
*Dev
Scented Candles
2005-02-04
ch 1,
abuseOMG! Why won't you update it often? WHY?! *cries* I think this one is my favorite out of all your writings too!
The flow of the story is very fluid and although there is a certein simplicity to it, it still manages to be poignant at the same time.
Kaoru dies...i don;t care, i just want to read this story. It's like i'm beginning to be obsessed with it! Hook, lin and sinker, i am truly a fan of yours! ^_^ Great job and i really hope you update soon...(yes i know you won't update often but one can only hope, neh?)
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