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| rachael 2008-03-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseAlot better than a lot I've read recently. very good |
| starryeyes10 2008-02-09 ch 3,  | abusegreat story. |
| ---- 2008-02-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseActually I think that this story is very sweet. I am the same person who wrote the comment before with the -. But I judged it too soon from the first chapter. It ends very sweetly! |
| ---- 2008-02-07 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis was too fast-moving. i didn't know where you were half the time. I think too much happened in one chapter. Sorry! |
| Alexandra'Alex'Ryan 2007-11-22 ch 3, | abuseGreat Story you have gripped me in anticipation! Write a Sequel PLEASE! |
| OSUSprinks 2007-04-25 ch 3, | abuseWonderful! Simply wonderful. I loved that her dreams came true. So great. Thanks for sharing. Happy writing, Sprinks |
| ImSoMMAD 2006-01-22 ch 3, | abuseAw it's so cute!! It's a great story line and the interposing the dreams with what was really happening was great!! Nice one!! Thanks for brightening my day, xxStellaxx |
| RevSue 2005-10-10 ch 3, | abuseVERY nice ending! I'm SO glad they got together in the end! Thank you! |
| Amandah Leigh 2005-09-27 ch 3, | abuseThe ending was a little too short for my taste (I would have liked to see the proposal, wedding, and birth of the baby, but I guess I'll have to use my imagination) but I thought it was very cute. :-) AL |
| Hannah Storch 2005-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this story. It's very cute. But I think that it'd be better if you'd make Grace not such a "girl-ish" character. Like, she's all right I guess, but I think she needs to be a little more assertive and less shy around Oliver, no matter what kind of dreams she's having. Also true that he is her boss, but you're the author! Have them get married and have kids. I always liked the relationship between Oliver and Grace, whenever I watch Annie. Great work, keep it up! Write more! |
| The Anomalous Radish 2005-09-01 ch 2, | abuseThis story is so cute! I hope you find time to finish it. |
| RevSue 2005-07-25 ch 2, | abusePLEASE update this sometime soon! I really like this story and would like to find out what happens! Susan |
| Amandah Leigh 2005-07-25 ch 2, | abuseThis is cute! I hope you update soon! :) AL |
| Amandah Leigh 2005-07-25 ch 1, | abuseHi! I like your fic thus far, but I have one little issue... After the first dream, Grace tries to forget it, then she's dreaming again, and awoken by her alarm clock. What happened between "Certainly sir," and another night of dreams? If you don't plan to transition it with words, maybe add a line to seperate the two parts? Also, I think that by "abject" you meant "object." Abject means, like, horrible, miserable, etc, where as object is to protest, or raise an objection. :) AL |
| Angela 2005-07-24 ch 2, anon. | abusePlease update your story |