Your fic is really good. I like it very much. Cicada's one of my favourite characters, so it's a pleasure to read about him :) I hope you'll someday update your story. Looking forward to reading new chapters.

Everytime I see this story and that there is no more, it makes me cry a little inside. :'( :'(

This story is really fascinating. I hope you decide to continue it some day.

I'm becoming quite a fan of your writing. You flesh out the characters and their world so well! I can't wait to read more.

I love this fanfiction. I had already read it about a year ago, but I had another read to refresh my memory. You're a great writer, your attention to detail is astounding. I love Dio and Lucciola, they're my favourite characters. I hope you update soon.

Just read your story (I only first discovered Last Exile a couple of weeks ago) and I must say, brilliant! Good idea and good english :). I noticed that it is over a year ago, that you last submitted a chapter, which I think is sad... if you don't want to continue the story here, then I would love it, if you could email the story *begging eyes* I really want to know what happens next!

Louise

I´m new watching Last Exile, but I really like Dio and Luciola. You have a great fic over here, Delphine is acting so great, as usual. Wish to see more of it soon.

update!

i really like this fic. . . when reading it one can actually picture the charactures acting it out. . . as a writer you were really able to continue or lead up to the story of Last Exile. . . please continue writing, you have my support and i want to read the end of this fic.

Hm ... Yes, I like this. I've always wanted to know exactly how the Guild reached the state that it was in at the start of the series. I like the way you set up the deaths of Dio and Delphine's parents. It seemed so ... appropiately Guild. Also, I love the way you've handled Luciola. He's one of my favorite characters. And, honestly, I'm sad that he hasn't had a chance to really talk with Dio yet. The two of them make such a fun pair. I hope you decide to continue this fic.

wow you are very talented i have recently finished watching last exile...and fell in love with delphine,cicada, dio and luciola...and then i read your fic...very awesome...i hope you update soon

I love detailed back story plots and this one is so well done. These characters are the most fascinating in the series. I can't wait to see more. I really hope you update soon.

Wonderful chapter. I really love how there are little phrases at the end of each section-thingy that are kind of surprising... I love Cicada. That is so sweet that he seems to care about Tuck on the inside...I really hope he isn't evil. Great job!

Oh, creepy. Nice touch, with those eels. Heh, Cicada looking out for Lucciola. That’s interesting. Please update soon. :)

Wow! Another amazing chapter. You have no idea how jealous I am of you! I hope my story comes out even half as nice as yours.