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xDarklightx
2009-10-26 . chapter 19
I love it. The plot is so great. It is insane.
N
2009-10-08 . chapter 19
I read your story. It's FANTASTIC! I love it so much! Cruel Harry/Davis/Viper forever! :D Please, continue it! It became one of my favourite story. You are brilliant! Oh, my God! I even want to become such a cold, perfect person like Viper. YOU made me feel like this. I'm pride of you. You are great, really! :D
ReaderMike
2009-10-07 . chapter 19
Damn your good,
loved the story it was quite fascinating and a wonderful take in the good old Harry Potter multiverse. I really enjoyed it.
Regal-13th
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
He's Evil it sounds evil!
Miss C Riddle
2009-08-29 . chapter 19
Harry/viper is dead? cool story, love the mindless killing *rolls eyes* i enjoy a good horror story and this is bloody brilliant (get the joke bloody...) anyway... is there a sequel andyes you did manage to confuse me.
Lady Cathy
2009-08-29 . chapter 3
This story shapes out really nice! Great! I'll be off to read the next chapter!
Doubleblade Miriko
2009-08-22 . chapter 19
I'm forever mad at you! You killed Viper! No, No, No!

I'm still not relaxed enaugh to comment this story properly, but I will try.

First of all this was written exelently, there was some grammar and spellin mistakes, but I don't mind. Ewrighting was almoust perfect. This is the best of stories I've ever read.

As you can maybe see, I loved Viper. He's so lovely evil and sadistic. I laughed when he tortured the Adams, it was fun. Even I'm not that twisted! And I liked Draco more than I can say, but I'm still mad at you, you killed Viper! Those first words are my first expression of what you did to him. Don't get me wrong, this brilliant story, but you killed Viper!

I love evil, dark, Slythering Harry fic and this was the best of them all. I'm hoping you will write something loke sequals to this, like what happened to Voldemort or somethong like that. I think I'm liking you writing style. Maybe I ad you to my favourite authors? How nows?

Thank you for this fic and now, I'm going to go and cry my eyes out. You killed Viper!
leighargeneau
2009-08-11 . chapter 6
Thanks for the story! Good work! I really enjoy dark harry stories and i like your viper a lot.
You've described Dumbledore as purely good is he so good that he's actually evil? Or is he just naive? I like the evil version better, but simply good is good, too.
Keep the good work up!
Kyuuka
2009-08-04 . chapter 19
Hm...I think I fell off into the abyss there after that last chapter. Voldy's acting funny I bet he knew and that girl Viper fought is some different form of this dark goddess you keep hinting at I think, and I feel sad for Viper about Sow maybe he actually liked the Mike guy and realized Viper was an out of control psychopath not even he could control. But those are just my observations and HA to fricken HA with Goff I almost wish Viper had got him and torn him to shreds but alas no such luck maybe he can torture him in Hell. Silly Voldy getting into Vipers dreams and pretending to be his lover well I can't wait for the sequel and my had falling off from all the madness but I love death and blood so keep it all coming!!

Ja Ne

Kyuuka the Tenchi of Darkness
Kichiheaven26
2009-07-12 . chapter 19
Ugh, my head is spining. I had to read the last chap twice to regain some semblance of balance...><"
Okay, you've got me hooked to this story. Love the action, gore, and vipers darkness. Please update k??
shidoni
2009-07-05 . chapter 19
i read this whole thing and didnt find any hplv slash. whats the deal?
gothic-hands
2009-07-03 . chapter 1
Interesting first chapter, looks good thus far :)
Haruhi.Hime
2009-06-28 . chapter 19
so harry died?? o.o plz update soon!
me
2009-06-18 . chapter 19
i was really interested in what the blood magic did but you never explained it fully.

your writing style-main ideas are awesome, but something about it-i had to keep taking breaks to keep myself from getting bored even though i liked it.
bokskywalker
2009-06-08 . chapter 19
Wow! One of the most confusing and psychotic stories I've ever read, well done!
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