Beautiful. Perfect Buffy characterization, especially at the end there. I can really see this pairing working. Nice job, very pro. There are areas where you handle Harry's contributions with a great degree of brevity, but you do it well, and it's necessary in a one-shot like this.

Great fic! I love it!

Wonderfully done!

Interesting. The characters played off each other nicely. I especially liked Buffy's voice.

cute

Nice, I like it ^_^