Yay:-) "And another one bites the dust..."

hehe...brilliant ending.

and i'm guessing they lived happily ever after!

yay jins okay and lol loved the ending

oh and thanks for the mention

well i did like to read the fight scenes but nevermind, overall excellent so far!

Oh, the suspense is killing me! Is that Nina, back for more?

I love your original take on the story! For the most part, you preserve the characters. You did an AWESOME job with Bryan, I must reiterate *Swoon*...

I admit, Jin isn't much like I pictured him. I guess it's all perspective, right?

Update son!

xiaoyu is his wife ...okay

um good story so far

Wow...bout time u updated 2! lol jus kidding. Luv this story! Another thrilling chase between an assassin and Jin...hope ur next update comes a lot sooner! Nah, update wen u can!

first time reading a tekken fic.. by any chance do you know a website that tells the individual stories of all the characters? i know a few, but i haven't played tekken in like 3yrs...

Great Story! CONTINUE NOW! This is such a great story!

Normally, not a story I'd go for, but you're managing to pull it off successfully. Good job and keep it up!

*Birdie laughs jovially in the back of her throat* Oh, take that, and Anna picks up the rebound! That was awesome... I LOVE YOU SO MUCH BRYAN, WILL YOU MARRY ME?

Draco (Short, stout dragon, Birdie's creativity.): I don't think it'd work. He's a cyborg... and you're not.

Birdie: Yeah, well...

Draco: And since when did you chase after guys? You're worse than Mary Sue.

Birdie: I like the wrong type of guy as far as these things are concerned... Anyways, that was a nice addition to an interesting story! What does this make me think of...

Draco: A Series of Unfortunate Events?

Birdie: Yup, with just a twist of comic relief with Xiao and 'Rang. I love this, keep writing or I'll have to send Bryan after you.

Draco: Like he'd listen... Very creative. Continue, for the sake of keeping quality present on ! *Scowls at Birdie*

Hi, i think you're doing a good job here! Congratulations and update soon.

I can't wait to read more!

About the title, if you really think that you don't like Hunted Down, then change it! In my opinion it's the story that counts! and the story is brilliant!

Your story definitely pulled me in...and it takes alot...one or two spelling errors that's all. Good job.

YES! Hwoarang, Xiaoyu, Bryan, Jin... Geez, all you'd have to do is throw Steve Fox in there and you've covered all my Tekken favorites. It's always nice to find a story that suits you perfectly, no?

Anyways, I love your characters. Clearly one doesn't have to be an expert in Tekken to be an expert in awesome fanfiction.

Only one criticism... The letter made it sound like Xiaoyu's Father is out to kill 'er, 'cause you said "your" instead of "one's." Unless that is true, you might want to look at that.

MY BABY BRIAN! HOW I LOVE YOU!

Interesting take. Xiaoyu and Jin, married... it had to happen someday.

First off, I love your Bryan. He's such a jerk, and I've always seen Bryan as a jerk.

Maybe I should read chapter two before I continue (Wow, I'm brilliant.) One minute!