Nah, you're sensible to stop the story there and not add anymore (it was good but more would probably just make the story sound forced). I thought it was cute how protective Shalimar was when 'spellbound' (although I could see the dangerous aspect of it...)
Anyway, good all round fic, well done.

sweet, so i guess thats the end huh? nice story

I must admit that I have only seen season three and a couple of episodes from before that. I like you you portrayed Emma. I wish I had been there from the beginning. I love this story! It is one of my favs. Very good job at writing it!

aw how cute, i love it. im sad it has ended as i love the cuteness of it, but hey as long as you write more then i'll be ok ;)

good ending there.

Loved this Story!

good ending
glad brendan apologized

Great story. You should consider writing a sequel.

I'm really enjoying your story thus far. I look forward to reading more :o)

I love this story its great... I just have to say is... NO! IT NOT FINISHED!

its really good and i hope to see more soon ^-^

Great new Chapter! Can't wait to read more..

I love this story please update soon

ooh, good chapter. can't wait for the next one!

yeah, yeah, yeah! please finsh that was great... that makes me want to write another fic with all the passion you put in it my fic are crap. please update soon. that was awesome

amazing chapter! very explosive, and full of suspense!

hope you update again soon :)