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blueberrypecan
2006-07-31 . chapter 1
If Lupin never shows up in another Harry Potter book, I'm blaming you! *sob*
Possum132
2006-02-02 . chapter 1
"All the rest of us, including myself, are expendable". That's prescient.

I can imagine Lupin making the sacrifice, I just can't imagine Snape being much bothered by Lupin's death.
bcoyote
2005-08-20 . chapter 1
Just reading that comment of Severus's after the last book - so eerie 0.0
zhaneraal
2005-05-05 . chapter 1
Awesome story. Short and poignant, and really lovely.

I just surfed on in from your review on my fic. This has been the best way to find great Snape angst.
amishgirl281
2005-04-30 . chapter 1
wow, increadible! It made me cry! I hope you do a sequel
June
2005-04-19 . chapter 1
Please do a sequal! I love your writing and stories and I can't wait for the next chapter of Secrets and lies.
cecelle
2005-04-12 . chapter 1
Ok, so now I am all choked up!

So Remus finally dies doing what he didn't have the gumption to do when in his teens - protect Severus. His sacrifice is absolutely heart-wrenching, and absolutely the right thing to do. Only one dies, instead of two (and probably many more who will get saved by the information Severus passes on.)

"He didn’t kill me, thought Severus with a tinge of regret." I had to swallow hard at that one - poor Severus, stuck in this role he really doesn't want.

And how horrid for Snape to just have to stand by and accept someone else's sacrifice. He has such a hard time being on the receiving end of thing...
Heather
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
Wow. That was powerful. Very powerful.
duj
2005-03-22 . chapter 1
Good work, especially Lupin's quick action saving the day - or at any rate saving what could be saved.
Verity Brown
2005-03-21 . chapter 1
O! Very nice! Well, ok, nice it's quite the right word. Gut-wrenching, how's that? I look forward to reading your other fics!
Lilithakaducky
2005-03-07 . chapter 1
That was very sad. *Sniff*

I really hope you'll be doing said sequell. This has the potential for a great Snape-angst-fic.

P.S. Sorry for not reviewing so long. I was very busy and ouldn't read, nor review most of the fics I wanted for a while.
Lady Jekyll
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
(Sobs) REMUS!! NO! Oh my Gods that was beautiful! I love it!
Hermione the Slayer
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
That was amazing... powerful. You are an excellent writer!
10000PoisonedKisses
2005-02-27 . chapter 1
I loved this. Absolutly beautiful
mercutio-rane
2005-02-21 . chapter 1
That was brutal...(sob). You're allowed to kill Remus, you know, but if JKR ends up doing it in books 6 of 7, I'll lose my mind and have to find a nice white room to live in until I get over it! LOL!

Very nice! Very well-written! In fact, it was so graphic it got me all choked up.
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