I'm going to tell you the truth when I say I've never really watched Yu-Gi-Oh. I'd watch it every now and then after Pokemon back in the day. Don't remember much about it though, but Marik seems cool. Nice story. ^_^ I recently watched episode 97 I think on the internet.

Yea, he's back!

OMG! Awesomeness... Why did it not continue? (Not being pushy or assinine here), but that was awesome! Aw Poor Malik and Marik and darn Rishid and his slurping idiocy! (I agree with you Malik) You have a real gift for the written word! And Marik being stuck in the shadow realm Gods that sux! Glad he made it back though this world would be so undesireable without Marik and Bakura! ^_^

o...^^ i like it this one a lot. i think the ending is just perfect

Wonderfully creepy. I loved the end. It just made you feel kinda warm and make you shiver at the same time.

What a cute story! You know, in a twisted sorta squished puppy sort of way. I really loved how you brought Marik back in the end. Well done!

yayayaya you should write more 'brain floats' theyre good.

Bravo. Yet another beautiful ficlet from the-person-I-am-stalking. XD

Aw. That's so sweet. I really likie. I'm glad you posted this.

nice very nice. although i have this strange urge to start baking apple pies ...

isis.

Wonderful oneshot, dahling. Keep them a'coming please!

I think this shows how Malik would feel very well. I mean, you just can't get rid of your anger! So of course his Yami would come back. And he's so understanding! It was really great. I liked this very much.

What did you paint? Good look inside Malik's head; it is a little scary in there. This is a more realistic continuation for him then the 'everything is peachy now that the evil is gone' theory. Though I like the cute (if a little crazy) Malik in your other stories better =) You know, you would think that the Pharoah would learn...Seto did not really change much after his mind crush... and spirits of darkness don't seem to be trapped by the shadow realm the way mere mortals are...
Meh... anyway, very good, glad you shared, hope your inspiration continues with your other stories=D

You got Malik! Wow. That was deep. Seriously, I think that was actually in character. Aside from the ending. Though one part of me says that could happen. Anyway... if this review is confusing you ^^... it was good. Are you going to leave it there? Would make a good one-shot. That's all.