wow in one chapter you manage to chase away the overdone storyline and write with clarity and aren't blatant. he went to the door nonsense. love it

That was brilliantly done. I really like the way you portray Snape and Hermione, and the way their relationship develops. Thank you for writing and sharing this story.

nice little story. i quite like the slytheriness of it all. and the originality.

im interested in reading the epilogue but cant find it on ashwinder perhaps you can send me the link.

:)

GLoW

five chapters in, I'm not sure what the point of your a/n in ch 1 is, and why you thought it necessary to say your story premise was better than everyone else's. Lots of fics fall into this category. It's a shame the tone ruins the story.

I love this story. I came to FFN so I could download it, because I originally read it on Ashwinder. I think you should upload the addenum and the part of the epilogue that isn't lemons, because I think they're both sweet, and the underage FFN readers deserve to read them, too! :D

Darn, what a way to end it. I like it's a pity they'll remove the chapters, but I'll have ot go to ashwinder...
WOnderful story though, well written. You've been able to keep everyone in character so well, it's very impressive. Seeing the slytherin vs Gryffindor personalities in a relationship is intresting. You write it well. I am use to seeing Hermione's personality become more slytherin, or where Severus becomes Gryffindorish, so reading your story where they both keep thier own, is refreshing.

Great story. I've just signed up to ashwinder to read the epilogue. You've got me hooked.

I loved it! Too bad I'm too lazy to register and such with that ashwinder site. Maybe I'll do it, just this once...

This is a great story and i will be searching for others you have written. I think it was a great idea to write "a likely story" as your right other peoples stories are interesting but some wouldnt happen in a million years.

OH MAN! Warrington and ...McGonnagal?? Well, I guess younger Gryffindor... Wowzers! That's a good plot twist, I like it.

absolutly briliant. i finished reading it on ashwinder, but im not sure how their review's work so i came back here to tell you how much i enjoyed it all, just one thing; at christmas ginny was looking for a particular pressent and when harry finaly asked her out she said she was going out with someone else, and i've come to the conclusion that it was draco but it was never concrete and i sortof got lost? could you reply to this or pm me and let me know if im right and if so, just in your mind, how their relationship(time wise) went? thanks again for writting the story.

How you portray Severus in this story is amazing. They are not my favorite pairing, but how you do it is fantastic. I would like to know how to find the next chapter. So please, with your next chapter on your work in progress, give me instructions.

This story is absolutely fantastic. The trama is brilliant and is beautifuly writting. I just love Severus Snape in this story, even more than i do Hermione. You really made the story with him.

But the ending is so disappointing. You took everything away from this story with that ending. It's a shame really, it would have been the best story i've ever read and i'm sure that many people would agree with me.

But congratulations anyway, great plot.

I like your story alot so far. I hope that you update soon.

That was an interesting chapter, but could you provide me with a link to this epilogue?