Hey S!

I'm having a REALLY busy week...but I've read carefully and I have lots of comments and praise to give - just give me a few more days! Wanted to let you know that I didn't forget about ya...

L, SASSY

hey! this is some really good writing! I was about to barge on my art teacher and demand use of his computer...but the bell rang...oh well...who is this girl? so currious! oh! and u asked for typos...there is one I believe about mid way through the chapter when heero decides he's bored...i dunno WHY but it REALLY othered me! lol...like I tried desperatly not to look at it...I'm soo wierd! >.< Anyway its the first line on a paragraph... "After several minutes pass my" I think you mean by? lol..ok, just ignore me! I'm soo freaky right now! sorry!

This is good. But it looks kind of weird, and I don't think Heero would have cleaned off dried tears. But still very good.

Sorry to bug ya girlie...but I'd love to see you update this! *smiling* Stalker Sassy misses your fics...

Peace, love, and chocolate,
Sassy

Go CUBS!

Well you'd better update this if you want to show us the scene in your artwork. I have yet to encounter the part that your picture dipicts.

Well you'd better update this if you want to show us the scene in your artwork. I have yet to encounter the part that your picture dipicts.

Sorry, I missed this when you posted chapter 5. I was looking through some old stuff this morning, and realized that you had updated. Excellent chapter. Lots of action. This story has me hooked! Update again soon.

Spork Spork bo-bork, banana fana fo-fork...

Ah, it makes me so giddy to get an author alert from you! Who would have thought that something non-TMNT would make me so happy!

Great chapter. You could really feel the fear from the girl assassin when she realized what happened to her - I'm wondering how well she'll cooperate when Heero actually does try to get information...

Good Angstiness on the part of Heero too - he's having a lot of trouble with these new feelings he's having...

Okay, so you wanted to know if there were any grammatical errors - I just found two little ones...in around the fifth paragraph, when you wrote "she slowly pushes herself to her knees", this is in the wrong tense. The only other thing that I saw was toward the end, a line that read "felling a little less like a soldier" (I'm assuming that you meant feeling). Other than that, absolutely spotless and stunning my dear!

Heh, so the girl is back with a gun to her head - this time she's going to have some answering to do!

Thanks for another fun read babe! ~SASSY

A little less action, but a great chapter none the less! Your writing impresses me. I'm anxious to know what the girl will do now that she's woken up! Update soon!

*singing* ...I'm craving for you, I'm missing you like candy...

Man, remember that song? LOL, I just found an old cd from high school and thought I'd see what's on it...I was missing your chapters...heh. Okay, that was dumb. Sorry, long, long, long, long, long day!

This chapter was well appreciated by me especially! I'm all about character analysis, and since Heero is so new for me, it was good to see what he's all about. I also have a better understanding of he and Ralena's relationship. It's not necessarily that he doesn't LIKE her, he's just unwilling to try because of his situation.

Poor guy, he's a teenager, he's not going to be able to suppress those feelings forever! I think that he's lying to himself a little about why he's keeping her around - since her computer's dead, if she refuses to tell him anything, he should kill her...but I don't think that he could.

Anyway, I enjoyed this muchly! Hope that another one is on it's way soon. One more thing...have you done any artwork for No Regrets? Like of Yin and Yom? I'd love to have a visual!

Peace out, SASSY

This chapter was even better than the others. But he shouldn't have saved that stupid girl! Oh well. What are you gonna do. I love the fast updates!

Ah... and what should my weary eyes find this evening...an update from Sporkey! FABULOUS!

Action - I should say! The first paragraph caught me off guard, and I read frantically to find out what happened! A bomb? Man, this girl is really serious. Looks like Heero has finally met his match - someone as dedicated as he is!

You scared me a minute with her pointing the gun at his face - thought he was a goner!

Gosh, I keep wondering what was happening at that ballet that was so important to this girl.

So Heero decided to save her...probably mostly for the information, but I think that it's a little of something else as well...

Did some of the people at the ballet die? Guess I'll have to wait and see!

Great chapter! Not long enough, I'm ready for more!

All the love, Sassy

Way to go, I enjoy the story. Keep it commin.

I like this. Your writing is very vivid. Hope you continue soon!

Yippee! Ask and I shall receive!

This scene was great, and of all things, I actually found myself giggling at the situation. Here are these two assassins, practically KIDS, dancing and seducing eachother, all the while the threat of death over their heads. Amazingly done. I could really sense the electricity in between them.

You're so mean with the cliffe!

Thanks for giving me a nice little study break. All the love, Sassy B