Nice idea and I liked reading it. Thanks for writing and you are a good author.

Hi there!

I noticed this story on somebody's favorites list and curiosity got the better of me, so I decided to read it. And couldn't stop. And read the whole thing straight through in one sitting. It was intersting and creative (and sexy!), bottom line - it was great!

My one criticism is this: I think you should have done it as an original story. Luke and Mara weren't really OFC for an AU, but they were different enough from their Canon personalities that they could have been done as original characters. Make them psychics or something, and everything still works. Cuz honestly, written as a fantasy short story, you could probably get it published. It was just that good.

Think I'll pop over and see what else you've written...

Wow, that was such a beautiful story! I only found it this evening, and finished reading it in one sit. You had me crying and smiling at the same time. Not many fics had such an affect on me, so be proud. Be very proud!

And isn't it ironic that the rule that was the reason for Anakin to destroy the Jedi is still in force while the sith rule.

That was completely, totally beautiful. I have never read anything like it before. I usuall HATE dark Luke fics, but I think you may have turned me on to them... I loved the way Luke was completely evil and cold, yet there were moments where I felt bad for him and wanted to cry along with him. This was amazing, thanks for a great read!

wow just wow

~Al

Very well written. You don't find many good dark side stories but this was incredible! I hope to read more from you. Keep writing!

To put it simply, you rock. I love this story and I look forward to being able to read more of your works. I love how you made it dark and mysterious. The dark side of Luke is awesome! The smut part was good too... Heeheehee...

To say that this is a Dark!Luke fic, the ending was surprisingly sweet. I almost cried on the part when Vader died; I felt so sorry for poor Luke, and then when Mara went to comfort him...It was so gut-wrenchingly sad. This is the first Luke/Mara fic that I've ever read, and I must say that now I like the couple.

Very nice work. I enjoy SW fics involving characters and the dark side, much like this one.

this may be the best story that i have read

Even though the Dark Side makes you think that the people it consumes are incapable of happy emotions, you have to stop and think that those people aren't devoid of love or laughter, they just don't accept it as easily. This story is a good way of showing that.

Interesting take. I enjoyed it.

Perhaps then, I shall make a vow, never to write again. This was awesome. Beautiful. Exquisite.

I always thought DarkLuke was sexy, but you've taken him to a whole new level.

Thank you for sharing this.

Enjoyed it. Thanks for writing this.

SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL!